Wow! Not only was this a real good chapter, you left quite the cliffhanger! I can't wait to see what will happen next! O.O

When I first started reading this story, I was all 'eh, I've seen better', and that was about a year ago, I believe... Then, yester, bored out of my mind, I thought, what the heck? Why not give it a try?

Now I'm very glad I did so. This is quite possibly one of the best Ranma fics, and crossovers in general, that I have ever read. I greatly prefer this over, say, Hearts of Ice.

The way the mysteries grow, instead of being resolved, worries me a bit. It's awesome to read, but the increasing levels of Epic does increase the chances of this never being completed...

Satsuki is one of the better OC's I've come across during my years of reading Naruto fanfiction. Despite her considerable power, I don't get Mary Sue vibes.

Though, I'm having a hard time understanding why Terms of Engagement only has 450+ reviews, when fics not as good have over a thousand... ToE is going straigth to my Alert and Favorites lists.

Anyways, keep up the excellent work!

Again so many good chapters and I worry for Ranma I hope he is good and all and I love this story!

This looks interesting, but I can't help but smell buried dog for some reason... There's sumthing going on here that I ain't getting. A good thing, that. It's been a while since I read anything that manages to induce a sense of anticipation.

very awesome

“He’s only seventeen turning eighteen in less than a year"

HA HA HA what is wrong with you, way to write them stories

There really isn't anything wrong with your writing skills and while you do work a complicated plot well, you still have to learn how to tug on the emotional response from your reader.

How do I begin to tell you my thoughts about this work that you've managed to put forth? Technically perfect, however cold. Do you honestly believe that Ranma could be disconnected from family/friends his human element so completely? When he's training - his not killing speeches prevent him from evolving. He killed, dismembered for Akane - but could never do it again? Its alright for a child to kill other children? This in itself makes no sense to me. His lack of thinking or mulling over his own emotional connections with Akane - confuse me.

You said things had been going downhill, but enough for him not to love her? For what? The bath? If he is as combative as presented... he'd see taming her as an ultimate challenge. Granted, I have to admit I haven't finished this. It got to repetitive so I skipped to the end to see if there was something that indicated I should go back and fill in the blanks but it seemed to be more "know it all - superhuman" stuff.

Just because you say something doesn't mean the reader buys it.

Now I do appreciate the crossover but I think you honestly missed some key elements to keeping Ranma as engaging as most of us have come to know him.

This is a wonderful work. Reading more like a Tom Clancy writing than an average fan fiction writer. Just because I say you overwrote some things and didn't factor in other things -- does not mean that this isn't a good piece. It is a good piece, however not one that I feel invested into reading further in my current frame of mind. I might come back to it when I want something more technical.

Please avoid pounding things/explanations into the minds of the readers. Repetition is okay but having Ranma explain the same things so empathically over and over... the girl bit... and etc... well it kills something after a while.

I left off right before the Genin Exams... it was then that I decided that couldn't continue.

Looking forward to see more of your work and honestly hope you continue to write.

Mortimer

Nice chapter. Though now I'm quite eager for the next one and the side story. :P

Excellent chapter. Thx for the fast update. I have some ideas for crossovers, but it all depends on what you want Ranma to learn.

Very god section here, and with what was mentioned here at the end, can't wait to see where Ranma gets sent to for the next part of his training, as well as what happens with Satsuki and the ongoing battle with Naruto, who made a poor showing there imo with him acting much like the kid he was in school and a genin.

Love it, absolutely love this story, and I will certainly read the Side-story once its out. keep up the great work.

Sige! Sugod! Mag-post kayo ng mag-post! Ayos lang ang ginagawa niyo! May God bless you!

Pretty short chapter indeed. Will be looking forward to future chapters, however.

Yay, more chapters~! xD

Great job on this story, really been enjoying it so far.

Keep it up~! :P

-Tari

I like this chapter. It would be nice if Ranmacould take Satsuki back with him once he returns home and maybe adopt her as his official daughter.