great P.O.V.'s. I like how you said what they would have. It is lovely! this Dia person sound good also.

I liked this a lot, I've been meaning to write some poetry like this.

I Like it. It is very strange for fanfiction But it is my favorite

Exactly! Wonderful job, this is perfect! I hope you continue to write stories!

Loved it. I think it describes the relationship perfectly.

aw that was adorable!

Lovely.