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rettop-yrrah
2008-03-11 . chapter 14
i don't know how long is "till the next..." means, but it really is frustrating waiting for so long, you know?
so, please(200x) update, will u?
VacantSkies
2008-01-09 . chapter 14
An update would be nice :P
-Vandos-Girl-
2008-01-08 . chapter 14
UPDATE UPDATE PLZ PLZ PLZ UPDATE!
R2-D2106
2007-07-16 . chapter 14
Update please? this is very good!
allaballa
2007-04-30 . chapter 14
Great story n plot. can't wait for the next chapter
teamedwardfanpire
2007-03-18 . chapter 14
I love this Sory and hope that you update very soon. Can't wait to see what happens next!
lili-potter8907
2007-02-21 . chapter 14
wow that was great. I can't wait for more please continue soon. and i hope you feel better soon.
Alyx
SwishAndFlick31
2007-02-19 . chapter 14
Cool. I thought it was cool, the way you changed the prophesy around a little. Question, though, is Harry still the Boy-Who-Lived? And when will Harry and Hermione finally have some shag time? Haha, I'm sorry, my fingers took control for a moment. *hehe*

Update Soon!

SwishAndFlick31

PS: I'm an author, too (hinthint)
CharmedNightSkye
2007-02-18 . chapter 14
I'm gald that Malfoy finally has his wife back. Man that took forever. How horrible that Voldermort would kil one of us followers to demonstrate a point!

I can't believe that the rulers still don't know what is happening with their children. It was really intense when you had Cedric and Hermoine bleeding through their noses. Probably not a pretty sight. It was so funny how Hermione and Harry are were having a lover's talk righ tin the middle of a crisis with Cedric listening. Il oved it when Luna blushed becasue of waht Hermioen was feeling. Too funny.

How creepy that Voldermort kept calling Hermione "his bride". That's going to keep some therapy. It was so cute how her base instint was to protect Harry. Intersting how they all said that spell at the smae time. Go Heirs of the the Founders! Ooh I like the hint of what happened at Harry's first birthday. I bet he will be demanding answers when he is well enough. Can't wait to hear your spin on that. Very good ending. Very cool. Til later readings
-Vandos-Girl-
2007-02-10 . chapter 13
dont stop there, ohh i hope everything wrks out ok, hope to c an update soon
CharmedNightSkye
2007-02-09 . chapter 13
I can't beloeve what Voldermont did to Cedric. I wonder what really happened. It's sweet that Hermoine found him. What an intense battle in the castle! I really hope that Sirius is alright. It would be so sad if he died. Or if Queen Sara was mortally wounded. Hermine would be so sad. I can't to see how HArry goes to help Hermoine. Til later readings
fleeting.ideas
2007-02-09 . chapter 13
aw
so much fluff fodder with so many curses :]
fleeting.ideas
2007-01-26 . chapter 12
ah, nice teaser. I'll just wait then.
I liked the chapter, and I'm not bored.
But, good luck with that action thing. :]
blink.2.times
2007-01-20 . chapter 12
r they serious?!?!?!?!?!!
UPDATE SOON!
Lolaleddir
2007-01-19 . chapter 12
What made you think that we were bored with the story? We are very very intersted actually! well, at least I am. Glade to finally see chapter 12, that chapter 11 and 3/4 was something I never seen before, that's gotta be a new fanfic invention! Please update soon!
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