 Kaze Takiruna 2008-12-09 . chapter 31 What? You haven't updated in forever. WHY, OH, WHY, CRUEL FATE! Pwease update. *Jigglypuff eyes* |
 WildCroconaw 2008-10-28 . chapter 8Sweet! Chira got a new friend in Insight!
MEANIE! why would any one abboned an eevee just cause they are weak? Eevees are very inteligent pokemon and have great potential as fighters. Not to mention they are cute! |
 WildCroconaw 2008-05-21 . chapter 3Who is the the person who walked through the bushes? have they beem watching Chira and Cami the whole time? |
 Guitarprincess 2008-05-21 . chapter 1Wow! great prolouge! |
 WildCroconaw 2008-01-31 . chapter 30So that's what the Gift is! it when ia trainer joins consciousness , or bonds with their pokemon, like what Erin and Zwillum are doing |
 Ehani 2008-01-05 . chapter 30I really like this story. Keep it up! |
 WildCroconaw 2007-12-24 . chapter 29gr. I hope Morrie and Cami cream Greg's pokemon! how dare greg kick poor little insight! |
 Khgirl08 2007-10-24 . chapter 28Yay! Another chapter, at long last! I really like this chapter, but I hope that you explain all these people soon! :) |
 WildCroconaw 2007-10-16 . chapter 28Hey, thanks for the shout out. You're right I LOVE this story. (I've just been busy so I haven't reviewed lately). What's with those strange figures and what do they mean about the strong ones getting weak as their gift grows? And who is their master? I think it's cool that Chira wants to find out more about her birth parents when she gets to the orange islands. Keep up the awesome work! |
 Guardian of the Hell Gate 2007-10-14 . chapter 28Hey! I'm glad you finally updated (Sorry I didn't review the last chapter...I must have been feeling lazy.) Anyway awesome chapter, and I can't wait until your next one. Until then...Ciao. |
 Kouken 2007-09-16 . chapter 27Oh man! I want more and I want it now! ^_^
Your story has inspired me to write my own Pokémon fanfic! I can't post it here though because... Well... I don't know how. ^_^
I would really love it if you could add me on your msn if you have one. Mine is |
 Kouken 2007-09-14 . chapter 7Oh my ** god I love your story! I really want to talk to you O_o
Add me on msn if you want it's
If you don't like this strange comment of mine then don't add me ^_^ |
 Fear Loves Me 2007-08-29 . chapter 27And so the title starts to make sense... The real mystery is finally starting to unravel... And Chira's struggles are just beginning...
That's my guess anyway. ^^ Another wonderful chapter. Can't wait for the next one.
-Z |
 Khgirl08 2007-08-25 . chapter 27and so, the mystery begins! I can't wait for the next installment! |
 Elliott 2007-08-01 . chapter 10 This story is SO SO AWSOME! I can't wait to see what happens next! |