I loved it. I was confused for a while since your summary said JarethXOC but this was genius! I would love you to write more.

Beautifully done. I loved this so much!

Quite a unique little tale, isn't it? I very much so enjoyed it, although I was sorry it did not go on longer. You must continue!

You see, when I first began reading this, I thought the guy was going to be Jareth.
All I was thinking was 'Great, another JarethxOC'
BUT!
No, it was not Jareth, but Toby.
I loved that.
When I first realized it was Toby, I gasped.
Literally, I was like 'Eh.Mah.Gawd! No way.'
Great story, I loved it.
And I'd LOVE to see more of Donna and Goblin Toby
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