Looking forward to more! :)

wonderful and exciting! Great battle scenes and perfect shep whump. More please :-)

Yep, definitely screwed. I liked the way you did the chapter from a semi-conscious Sheppard's point of view. Loved the last line - seems very appropriate.

I think that I am addicted to this story. Please give us more as soon as it is done. Really great story, I can wait to see how they make it out of this one...I am assuming they make it out...please.

Great start :) On to chapter 2

Boy you really got some momentum going with the tension. Keep it up and update again soon. I'm literally on the edge of my seat here.

This may be your first foray into SGA fandom but you're doing wonderfully well at it. From where I'm sitting you don't need a beta at all. You've caught these characters perfectly and the fact that you've imperiled everyone back at base as well as the away team is a masterstroke! Add to that some delicious Rodney-snark and Shep/Ronan whump and this is shaping up to be a wonderful adventure!

Kitty

So much action! The tension and desperation come through nicely. Look forward to the continuation.

No... you can't leave there. That was an evil cliffy. ;)

This story is so exciting, please update soon!

OMG! You are pure evil leaving us hanging like that. AHH! What the heck is that thing that went through the gate? I'm dying to find out. I also can't wait to see what you have planned for our stranded soldiers back on the planet. Hurry and get those fingers typing. Looking forward to the next chappie with great anticipation.

Holy cow ! How fast can you write ?

I think we've gone beyond "exciting" now, but I'm not sure what to call it. Whatever it is, it's about to give me a heart attack, so I hope you're writing the next chapter. GREAT job, by the way!

Very exciting chapter. You have captured the fear and apprehension and horror of what's going on around them. I found my heart racing faster and faster as I read. Great job!

Great story! Very tense and exciting. You describe the action really well. I loved the Sheppard/McKay banter too! I'm looking forward to more!

Great story!