That's so sad! :...(

This is really good!

sighs I wish MY first poem was that good...

I don't like it much, to tell the truth. For a first attempt at poetry, it's very good, but by normal standards it isn't much. The rhyming format takes some away, because it comprimises some of the flow of the poem. Some lines have more or less syllables, and it messes up the rhythm. However, there aren't any spelling mistakes, and it does have a good theme/plot/whatever. And it all rhymes well. The rhyming is probably the best format for this particular poem, but you're better at non-rhyme. _ KittenGirl555

Great job! Really powerful.

I liked some of the other ones better and it's got a great point to it!

great poem!

I really liked it. It was deep. I don't think that there are any fanfics or poems with Karen.

It was very very VERY good! Except...dontcha think it applies to all the Animorphs?

Great great great. You weren't just pulling out words that rhymed, I can tell you put a lot of thought, feeling, love, and emotion into this poem.

I think you suck!

MG! How do people write poems like this?

Well, I wasn't going to give you a 10 to begin with, but when I noticed you were spammed, I figured I should help you pull up your rating. It's really cute.

I really liked it, very insightful.

Bravo!