You idiot. Kefka is a violent madman, not this flowery angstified jagoff.

Your writing style is decent and can improve with practice, but until you learn a bit about keeping someone you don't own in character, don't do fanfic.

Oh, what a touching and...something...ficcie. Good. Very good. Can't really use sweet with Kefka here but very good nonetheless. You did Kefka very well, I though. The first person works, here. Bravo.

*sniff* That was a sad story. I was on the brink of tears. poor keffy. KEEP WRITING!

OMG! That was sooo sad. I almost cried. Poor Keffy. he needs a hug. (Gives Keffy a big hug and whispers) There, there, Keffy. You just forget all about that mean ol' esper.

Awsome! Wow ... and to think I thought Kefka was just plan nuts! Great job!

Ah, I never expected this side of your writing to reveal itself in all its glory. Perhaps I'm a little more lucky than this world ever gave me credit for. It good. Very good in fact.

*sniffle* Poor Kef...

Poor Kefka. It's good to see fics that give him a more human side. And like Maggie said, the similarity to her name with Terra's would make for an interesting story in itself.

Excellent fic, I'm going to add this to my collection of FF6 histories! This one really fits in with the storyline well. Someone should make it official!

Awww, how sweet...:pause Wait, a minute, that wasn't sweet! That was um... bad esper! Bad esper for no talking to Keffy!:sniff No jelly beans for the esper... But it was good. Really. _;

Ooh, that'd be enough to send him over the edge, wouldn't it? And her name, Tara. Would that make Kefka especially resentful toward out own Terra? Very sad.

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::tear That was depressing, but well written ;_; Nice fic _

Awww... poor Lord Kefka! This was really nice! Great job!