THAT WAS SO SAD POOR ROGER

This is a cute story, and I'm interested in seeing where you go with it. I have one teeny comment, though. Roger's surname is "Davis," not "Davies." There is, however, a "Roger Davies" in Harry Potter, which has always struck me as an interesting coincidence.

Wow thats so sad! Wonderful chapter!!

Jade

aww, poor baby roger! *hugs him*

Awesome chapter!! you keept her in character!

Jade

I love this and I love how you portrayed Maureen

oh...poor poor Maureen. ) :

Aw! Cute story! I really like it. Keep it up please! I eagerly await the next chapter!

*claps for Maureen* Stupid boring friends!!

Aww. Angel's a cutie. Great start! Update soon.

Awesome story!! cant wait to read more!

Jade

*applause* I love Angel, this is very nice, can't wait for Maureen! (she rocks!)

Aside from a few technical errors, that was really well done. I can't wait to read the next chapter!

aw!! It was so cute! I love stories like this. Update soon!

That was so beautiful and very Angel-like! Excellent first chapter