Good oneshot in my opinion. I especially liek how you've written from Jareth's POV and if I do say so, you've captured his character perfectly.

Really good! I want to read the next part now!

aw! Poor Jareth! Can't help but feel sorry for the poor dude! It was very well written. I love the way you put so much emotion in it.

i think its very moving and cant wait to read the real story of yours =)

I have one thing to say: you better write more or I will burn you with my waterflames! (bows head meekly) Sorry, I lost control there for a minute. Pleez write more!!

Oh plz plz plz plz write more! this is a great prequel to a much longer story and i'd really love to read it! keep up the good work!

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WOW that is such a great story. please continue it makes me fell sorry for the (so called villian) in Labryinth...
you have a great gift in writing please continue to provide this gift to us

thanks
Autumn

Very good story. Looking forward to seeing that longer story up soon!

A little bit of a verb tense problem in the last sentence.

I like it! I can't wait for the other story to come out!