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Authoressinhiding
2009-07-10 . chapter 40
Aw, Ames!! Me sorry for the deletion.
IheartJohnnyD
2009-05-12 . chapter 40
NO! Not deleted! lol Lack of inspiration is evil!
Authoressinhiding
2009-03-14 . chapter 39
I'M BACK!
I have been away for ages...
but now I finally spent an hour and got all caught up.
The story pwns. I'm sad that there are only a few chapters left, but look forward to reading the rest of them.
Congrats on finding your pirate necklace again!
AiH
Little Miss Sparrow
2009-02-22 . chapter 39
!! Anger = dragon: brilliant. And the whole thing with grief, which turns into anger. Just...yes. And a pangolin! So cute and sad all curled up into a ball!

So, I'm awfully curious about what happens next. Up to this point it's been "go find the next manifestation!" but now I'm looking forward to whatever the big finish is gonna be. =3

And now, we interrupt this review for something rather pointless...

Firstly, thankyouthankyou. I'm completely obsessed with Doctor Who now and it's all your fault. xD I
Little Miss Sparrow
2009-01-27 . chapter 38
Aw, I love the idea of all the different horse creatures! ^^ Especially the "horseflies"; they make me think of Spy Kids 2. xD Once again, I lovelovelove this world.
Spoarrowlover
2009-01-25 . chapter 38
You should have seen my face when I saw there was another chapter! I'm so happy! YEAH! Update soon!
Little Miss Sparrow
2009-01-12 . chapter 37
Oh man. xD That Pirate Rap is priceless.

Teddy seems to be adjusting quite well to the whole magic thing, eh? x3 I s'pose he'd better, though; there's hardly enough time to explain everything to him.

Okay. I LOVELOVELOVE the idea of this Realm they're in now. Well, maybe not as an actual place, but as a story idea? Awesome. I'm in the same boat as Amy here - people really need to learn to respect nature for what it is, not disregard it because it's different.

Great chappie, as usual. Good work! ^^
Little Miss Sparrow
2009-01-12 . chapter 36
I liked it pretty well, actually. Only I sort of stopped after...three episodes. ^^; Kinda lost interest. So I really can't give you any feedback about the Doctor's character, 'specially since you're using the Tenth Doctor! Sorry. xD

Still a very good chapter, though. I'm a sucker for the !DRAMA!, and you pull it off very well. Keep it up! ;3
Captain Rika Kisuktai
2009-01-01 . chapter 37
Psych? I LOVE that show! There was a marathon on the other day and I remembered how much I loved the show.

And now that my burst of random noting is done, threequel? Oh my. I can't wait. Where, oh where, could Sparrow's Anger be? Oh where, oh where could it be?
Captain Rika Kisuktai
2008-12-04 . chapter 36
The Doctor was great! But this raises more questions...How did Mandel get a hold of the poison?! Argh...
RespectTheSporks
2008-11-20 . chapter 35
i know i didn't say anything last time, but sory that i didn't reveiw! i've beevery busy with school lately.. we had a big senior paper due in englis, and it's been stealing up all my usual reading time!!

anyway, greaat chappie!! can't wait til the next
-holds breath-
RespectTheSporks
2008-11-19 . chapter 34
AH! -gasps for air- omg, i miss a couple of updates and you spring this on me!! AH!! (great chappie, though at one point you say that she "can rake care of her self" about a third of the way down when she is giving James reasons why she will be fine on her own with the captian.)
Little Miss Sparrow
2008-11-16 . chapter 35
Oh, wow, there's an actual "Rewiew this Story/Chapter" button now. xD Okay, so...you've convinced me to go watch the first episode of Doctor Who after I've written this review. Because I hate not getting references, and because I can. So. Yeah. Ahem.

But more to the point...OMGJAMESNO! Which pretty much sums it up. Okay! Write more plz. =D
Captain Rika Kisuktai
2008-11-14 . chapter 35
O.O No way. *SQUE!* *boogies* The Doctor's going to pop up? This gets crazier and crazier!...Was Mandel and alien? ;D
ArmoredSoul
2008-11-13 . chapter 35
O.o
Which doctor would that be again?
...
OH.
THAT doctor.
Ok.
That's not good.
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