I read this amazing story about chris as a kid, where he's asmatc...and I was thinking...there were a lot of scenes in charmed...where it seemed like Chris tired easily or something...I'd love to see that...with him as an adult..referring to the show itself...is thereanyway u can write that at all??

hey hey!
this is a kewl story!

i can't wait for ur next update!

Wow that was too good. I can’t wait for your next update. This is one of the best story lines on this whole site. I love it that much. When I was reading it all I could think of was this is just the kind of story I always wanted to read. I have played this out in my head a million times. I hope you also do that the have to go inside his head to save him like they did with piper. And I really hope they find out a secret or two along the way. I love stories about mind reading or going into people’s heads. This was a really good read so far, and I really can’t wait for more, so please update very soon. Later dude

i understand. i know i need to do it sometime too with mine. i love your story!

why did you stop?!

this is really good
please update soon
i love the idea

Hey cool story, and I love the charcter of Selene. Looking forward the update. ;)

this is a really gerat story! please update soon!

That chapter was great. I really want to know if they find Chris. I hoe it and I hope you update soon.

Read you
Misato

This is so good, and you are very good at writing :P wonder what happens to chris, so please write mmorree haha :D

plz update! this is good!

Update soon
can't wait much longer

Tsk. Talk about being blind to the truth that had appeared and in your faces for months. I'd say they're all obtuse. Gad! The sister's have serious issues of male testosterone and ego. (shrugs) Might be because they haven't had much men (on permanent residence to do the ego trip and be stupid.

You're not evil. Chris can suffer a bit. He's strong. Plus, having Wyatt in the future as a brother, the demoness can't be much worse. Anyways, a litle (scoffs) pain would do a character good...Plus, it'll make Piper and the sisters more guilty when they find him.

I'll await further updates.

glad you updated again :-)

Don't really know what to say for the last chapter. But I must say you caught my curiosity. And the need to know more interests me. Do update soon.