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Reviews for: Crate of Apple Gels
Sharice Anderville
2009-05-15 . chapter 1
Ah, finally, a happy tune for Ms. Chloe Valens! I'm really happy that you explored Chloe's fun side here. I was giggling a lot (cuz my parents are around so I can't LOL or else they'd think I'm crazy)
And the SenelxChloe wasn't too prominent (for once)~ Yay for that!
Thanks so much for sharing this!
Bishieluver01
2007-12-13 . chapter 1
Yay new hat! X3 i can't imagine Chloe being so brave as to give Senel a peck on the cheek, but... Stuff happens. ^^'
iloveit
2006-11-22 . chapter 1
I'm a fan of SenelxChloe too. :D Yay for Chloe getting another hat... because, honestly, I love Chloe as a character, but I HATE her hat, lol.

I don't think it's too out of character. The way I imagine it, Chloe would probably be more likely to run off embarrassedly than walk away triumphantly if she ever got up the nerve to kiss Senel, but that's about it. You did a great job of keeping Senel's typical personality while he was giving her the hat. I can imagine that'd be kinda hard to do, and you pulled it off.

LOL @ Norma knocking Will over with the door and getting whacked on the head for it. I can so see that happening.
Kite1763
2006-10-21 . chapter 1
Aww, that was so cute! I love that pairing. Pretty good story you got here. I like it.
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