Wouldn't it have worked better to attack him with fire, though...? Aw well! I adore it, I love it, this is WONDERFUL! I love this fic so much! I can hardly believe you've written so MUCH of it AND a part three is already started~!

heh,the links combined forces make them into the avatar!

Must...find...out...what...happens... *dies*

... and you end with a cliff hanger. Could things get any worse?

I must say... those lines with "For yadda yadda" were kinda cheesy.

Who cares. =3 I like all those cheesy and cliched stuff.

Now listening to Tu Amor odd song, nice chapter, quick update too.

Whoa. That was...COOL. Now, my new goal is to read part 3!

If swords won't work against Ganondorf, maybe a bottle will! I beat him in OoT with one. xD

Maybe you should try adding it to this story to be a little absurd.

AHH! THE SUSPENSE! I ORDER TO TO WRITE! (Nah, just kidding)

Wow, I like this chapter. How on earth will Blue, Red, Green, Vio, and Shadow defeat Ganondorf?

New chapter Yaay!

Aww... poor Shadow! My friend was reading over my shoulder and she thinks so too. She was even crying.

"OMG, Aera! That was so sad!"
"Uhm, Ash, do you even know what this is about?"
"No, but it's still sad!"

What happened in this chapter? Rushed? A whole lot more English messups here then usualy. Other than that carry on.

Eek! Peverted Like-Likes! Heehee. Red turned red. You should've made one of the Like-Likes strangle Blue so he would turn blue. Same for Vio.
Green should've been slobbered on so he would puke. xD Green turns green...
I hope Blue doesn't leave Red. That would leave the poor thing heart-broken. And besides, isn't Green straight? Or is he bi?

We may never know. -pokes fun at OoT Link-

Gah!! I missed a chapter! I always seem to do that! Anyway a good two chapters.
Though I had a weird sense of dejavu(Thats how you spell it right?) with Green and the getting hold be the arms like that! Update soon!

. . .Like likes don't have toungs. . .right?

Aww... that was adorable.

And Shadow's also an arachnaphobe!
Green needs help on his serpentaphobia. I mean, seriously, who can resist those adorable little faces?

Snakes are so cute. =D