 ilovekyokyo 2009-04-23 . chapter 7Aww that is so cute >.<
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 Pseudonym Jareth 2008-09-15 . chapter 1Would it be bad to call our half demon a girl? I refuse to say anymore besides that it is kinda great but ... would it also be offensive to say the vocab is kinda kiddy-ish and bad grammar and well.. I sound evil, i'm so sorry. Please feel free to blast me to hell, it's okay.
Noon |
 iceypeach 2006-12-28 . chapter 7it was good-but too fast! use the unlimited chapter space! slow the stories down! |
 Agent of the Divine One 2006-11-06 . chapter 7A Sweet and sugary ending to end a tulmultuous time. :) Perfect. :) |
 RaexBBFan01 2006-11-05 . chapter 7aww! so cute ^^ I loved it, and wwh a happy ending, it's jsut a pity that the story has finished *sigh* oh well.. I'll try and read some of your other stories |
 longhairedhorse 2006-11-04 . chapter 7AW!! Great job! To cute for words!! I can just imagin a man screaming in the background whike they kiss. lol! Awesome work! |
 telluriantomboy 2006-11-03 . chapter 3hey so i was wondering, is love really an emotion? cos well to me it's much more than just that. |
 Blueyedgirl 2006-11-03 . chapter 7So sweet!! Fluffy goodness! Total awesomeness... keep up the good writing!!
~JaX |
 Blueyedgirl 2006-11-01 . chapter 6Keep Writing!! Really Good!! Update Soon!! Totally Awesomeness!!
~JaX |
 Agent of the Divine One 2006-11-01 . chapter 6Good. I only hope that they can finally start dating after this whole fiasco. :) |
 RaexBBFan01 2006-11-01 . chapter 6The story still remains exciting, update soon! |
 Beast of Brisingr 2006-11-01 . chapter 6Cool! I can't wait for the next chapter! Update when you can! |
 Slim Shady 2006-10-31 . chapter 4I love it! |
 Agent of the Divine One 2006-10-30 . chapter 5It never fails. Something good is about to happen and a villain has to interrupt.
I just hope that this ends well. |
 Beast of Brisingr 2006-10-29 . chapter 5woah. Interesting. Some sentences seem a little choppy and evrything is too quick and sudden. Um i guess you could say it needs to be longer. update when you can. staying loyal! |