Thx for a cute little fic x well done!

aw, thats so sweet! i love jasper! screw Team Edward, n Team Jacob. I'm Team Jasper.

Team Jasper does not play well with humans.

anyway i love ur story! u shud write more!

Oh this was very good. Nice and sweet. I like the drama playing out inside Jasper. I'm not sure why it's so hard for a guy that feels the emotional death of his victims to fight the bloodlust, or why it's so much harder for him than the others, but it sure makes for torturous stories. Thanks for sharing this one with us.

Very good. Truly felt like Jasper's POV. Keep up the good work.

Aww! That was cute. Great first fic btw, definitely a hundred times better than mine! I have yet to write for Twilight though... *sniff*

I love it ... I really like Jasper and Alice together.

That was sweet. Just a walk out to the car - who knew it could be so interesting to witness! Well done. Nicely in character!

That was really beautiful

great job

-BRAT!

yay, a Jasper and Alice story! there aren't enough of these...

That's a great story! I simply loved it! I really hope that you write some more!

This is really sweet. It's fluffy, but not so fluffy that it goes up your nose and down your throat and makes you choke. Jasper and Alice are both in character, and that's great. I really like this little vignette! Thanks!

Hi, I read your fic recently and I have to tell you that I love it. One thing, do you mind if I translate it into Spanish?

AlicexJasper couple is very cute, and you portray Jasper's love for Alice very well. Well, I'll wait your answer.

Bye!

I love it! I just read Twlight and New Moon a few days ago, (I finished them both in two days tops because I couldn't out them down,) and I fell in love! They are THE best books. My two favorite authors are Stephenie Meyer and Tamora Pirece. Anywho, this is really good. Great job.

That was adorable! You should write more to it!

aw, what a cute JasperxAlice story! I LOVE it. :)