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Hyperthia
2009-05-30 . chapter 3
Aw! They were all so cute! I especially love Ed and Al's first words! ^o^
Anime-Luver101
2008-09-29 . chapter 3
:O That was shweet!
Anime-Luver101
2008-09-29 . chapter 2
I almost started crying...T_T
Tears of Eternal Darkness
2007-09-08 . chapter 3
that was too cute! you must update soon! please! i will give you many. many cookies if you do *waves cookie jar* please?
=^-^=
Tears of Eternal Darkness
2007-09-08 . chapter 1
that was so cute! you should have continued with this one and had Roy apologise to Ed. now that would be a great parental RoyEd oneshot! i'll keep an eye out!
=^-^=
radcat38
2007-08-03 . chapter 3
Liked your series of short stories. Well-done.
LambSam
2007-07-30 . chapter 3
I love First Words: Al. Your short stories are really well written.
The Sacred Pandapuff
2007-07-12 . chapter 3
Hahahaa, so funny. And scary. Though I think Al and Ed shouldn't have been able to say "r". Or wait a second, maybe they should... the language is different from Finnish. In Finnish "r" is very strong and it's a little hard to learn so kids keep saying "l" at first.
But loved it anyway!
The Sacred Pandapuff
2007-07-12 . chapter 2
Hehee, kawaii. Ed spoke when he needed to speak. Smart kid.
The Sacred Pandapuff
2007-07-12 . chapter 1
Aww... poor Ed! Where is he, I want to hug him! *cries as well* So beautiful. Nobody ever listened. So unfair. I feel as touchy as ARMSTRONG.
Kyorma
2007-05-20 . chapter 3
Well, if that isn't just the most adorable thing **Hughes appears from nowhere and burys me under a mountain of Elysia pics and fics** ...help me...
Kyorma
2007-05-20 . chapter 2
**runs over to Ed and hugs him, tears streaming down face** Wa! Poor baby Ed! Good chapie, though.
Kyorma
2007-05-20 . chapter 1
**giggles quietly behind her couch** Er- I mean, poor Ed. I've had days like that too. Got me fired from my job, but on the bright side, I did get my point across...
E.Mahiru
2007-04-10 . chapter 3
You promised us another chapter with Fletcher and Russel in it!
PLEASE?
Lei-Anne
2007-03-04 . chapter 3
OMG I love all of your stories. Edwards first word made me cry and this one is just too adorable. I can actually see Al saying brother and and Edward as his first words.
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