I can't believe that Jennifer and Doc would actually hit each other. It's kinda funny, though.

I thought they were in 2015!

GRIFF YELLS A LOT! I WONDER IF HE LIKES THE CAPS LOCK BUTTON.

I love how much Marty cries in your stories.

that was my fav part in the whole movie - when doc sends the first marty back to the future & then the second marty comes outta nowhere. if only it was marty & not jennifer..lmao

I remember when i first saw this movie, & the delorean started 2 fly, i started laughing my head off!! Same with the train in #3

Why didn't you put this in the eplioge of Alternate Part I?

What does inconspicoius mean exactaly?

more very very soon please! i love it. parts isn't so personal b/c Doc is more personal to Marty than he is to Jennifer. Like how she said "there is only one man that can help." That saying is more personal to Marty and only he should say it. I think u should have kept Marty and Jennifer in 55 and only Doc in 1885. but it is still good. plz write more though. thanks. bye. :-)

Great job with the story! I'm really glad that Jennifer had a larger role in this story than being a background character in the last one. Only one thing though, in chapter 7 you typed the f-word and **. I want to warn you about this because you have this story rated K+, and if the matter isn't cleared up, you could have the story removed. Just giving you the heads up, and I can't wait for part 3!