oh please don't let that be it! I love it! Do more!

polease update *giggle*

Interesting. I like Owen's wooden, "Coming sir." And Veronica and Janet's difference of opinion on what their mission is.

Isn't the language a little strong for a G-rating, though? I wouldn't want you to get into trouble.

hehe, whens the next chapter come?

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Too short to get a feel for, but at least it is well constructed. Definite possibilities if the cuteness factor doesn't go overboard.

Ooh, this could be fun!

I wish you luck on your mission. Just try not to be too boring or cheezy. I've read a lot of stories like this that were terrible. )