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| remerkaba 2008-07-01 ch 10, | abuseVery different and interesting story. I really enjoyed your writing. This was a fun read. |
| Ranger24 2008-05-13 ch 5, | abuseNot half bad. Sort of can see how they might get along. |
| Anastashia 2008-01-19 ch 10, | abuseI really enjoyed this. |
| Anastashia 2008-01-19 ch 6, | abuseExcellent drama that she was being kept from coming to him right when he mot needed her. I love the last line. |
| Anastashia 2008-01-19 ch 2, | abuseThis is really wonderful. I've often wondered how old Lee was when William left. I think now it was some time after he was 10 because of his comment to Romo about his visit to his grandfather. We know for sure his dad was at least involved with if not married to Ann when he got recalled to active duty and I don't think Lee could have been to old then. It's sad to see he might have attempted suicide as a teen although with what he was going through perhaps not surprising. It certainly goes along with his character later specifically what happens in [i]Resurrection, II[/i]. It's nice to see him having someone to help him deal with the consequences of his mother's abuse. I've really wanted to see the show tackle Lee and Kara revealing the mutual maternal abuse to each other and how it affects their relationship. One small point. It's a little hard to imagine that Caprica and Earth would have exactly the same year so their birthdays would always coincide. |
| InfiniteThought 2007-11-14 ch 10, anon. | abuseThis story is totally original and completely awsome! great job. I wonder what jack's response would have been to seeing Sam make out with a random armed alien? |
| SkyBlueSw 2007-08-17 ch 10, | abuseI'm so a Kara/Lee Jack/Sam fan but I must say I enjoyed this fic with Lee/Sam it was down taste fully and not just throwing them together but building up a relationship that wasn't rushed. |
| Lenayvonne 2007-01-24 ch 10, | abuseNow I really liked this! It would be great if some one (or you) could write another version with different characters from the shows-- Like Kara and Daniel or something... |
| fliccolo 2006-12-14 ch 10, | abuseaw. great story! i loved it! |
| StarSplit144 2006-12-13 ch 10, | abuseI'm a huge SamJack and LeeKara shipper so at first I was kindof iffy about this, but I really ended up liking it, except for the couple little scenes where we saw Kara and/or Jack. The writing style is really good. Good job. |
| Hwoarangsguardie 2006-12-13 ch 10, | abuseAW! How sweet! I love it, its perfect! |
| Hwoarangsguardie 2006-12-11 ch 9, | abuseWhy don't the SGC send at least one SG team per ship with the battlestars, in case they meet like the tok'ra or something? I really love this story, its got a great plot. |
| fliccolo 2006-12-09 ch 9, | abusegreat chapter. can't wait to see what happens next. |
| Psyckosama 2006-12-09 ch 9, anon. | abuseGlad I could be of service. They should also bring some of the longer legged and more useful civilian ships with. Like the Flat Top and the Mining ship. Alot of the lesser, slower, civilian ships could be landed on planet and stripped down of the parts earth cannot yet produce, like jump engines, and shipped through the gate as needed. One one hand you have the short ranged ships at a location where the SGC can immediatly access them for parts for thier own ships. On another you have the Battlestars and the larger, longer ranged, more valuable ships on full burn for Earth. On the same note, the stargate is large enough that you could push a couple of Vipers and maybe even a raptor through. Though with the Raptor you might have to remove its wings. Throw some fighters and thier design specs through. That way when they get to earth they show up at a planet already equipted to protect itsself, at least to a digree because with the vipers they will have full specs and people from the civilian fleet who could easily be hired to teach others how to produce them. Expecially the Mk2 which was DESIGNED to the primitive. BTW, I've attached my email. We should talk. |
| yannik 2006-12-01 ch 8, | abuseHeh, you're incredible, you know? That was a fun read, but am I sensing trouble? |