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ChineseKunoichi
2008-04-08 . chapter 8
Um...I know this is a bad place ta contact you.

Unforunatley, you've disabled PM's on your profile -_-

So...re-an-able it...and we can get chatting! XD
Littlewhisker
2007-12-30 . chapter 8
It sounded like a really good story! Hmm... just me thinking to myself, but you could've gotten rid of the demons by Swiftfoot living, Shadowrose falling in love with him, and their love defeating them, but then that sounds kinda bad...

Well, good luck with other stories!
Littlewhisker
2007-12-30 . chapter 7
Aww... I'm sorry you don't like it; it was one of my favorites! I'll miss it!
Littlewhisker
2007-06-23 . chapter 6
Ok, you have that wrong:
That chapter was not bad,
It was great!
Update soon!!
Littlewhisker
2006-12-21 . chapter 6
I hate cliffies!! Please Update Soon!!
I Really Want To Know What Happens Next!! :D
ChineseKunoichi
2006-12-21 . chapter 6
Too lazy? Hmm...Whitefang and Thorntooth died BEFORE the death of Snowpool and Moonfrost? That's odd...very odd...something smells fishy *sniffs the air*
Littlewhisker
2006-12-09 . chapter 5
OK, I'll try to wait.
Littlewhisker
2006-11-05 . chapter 4
Correction:
It is not a good twist.
It is an awesome twist.

I never expected that.

I think Yarrowclaw is like Tigerstar, greedy for power.
ChineseKunoichi
2006-11-05 . chapter 4
Lol, its okay, I'm not gonna kill you, well thanks for updating...
Littlewhisker
2006-10-28 . chapter 3
Cool prophecy!! Let's see--the fire part is about FireClan; the ice part is about IceClan; stream part about StreamClan; and the rose and shadows, other stuff is about Shadowrose.

Am I right?

Awsome story!!:)
ChineseKunoichi
2006-10-28 . chapter 3
Great prophesy! 'Specially since this is your first fanfic! Yay! Brookpaw became a warrior! Shadowrose MUST feel really proud. UPDATE SOON!
ChineseKunoichi
2006-10-22 . chapter 2
SHORT CHAPTER! AAH! Sad...sniff sniff...Snowpool has gone insane! AAH! AAH! Oh yeah, and I post the next chapter of my story, sorry for the wait! UPDATE SOON!
ChineseKunoichi
2006-10-22 . chapter 1
OOH! AWESOME! ADDING TO FAVS! Wait, before I do, you have lots of spelling errors, like, you add an extra letter in a word, try to avoid that, and sometimes, when it needs to have an suffex there is no suffix. Also, when you wrote 'dragging' you wrote 'drabbing. Another thing and this is the final, did you get Moon from me!?
Saf Dawnheart
2006-10-21 . chapter 1
Agh, I HATE the Puss in Boots eyes! >.> *clickys review button* Like the other reviewer said (crap, I forgot their name already x_x), you need a beta to read this over. I caught a few mistakes.
Mocking Laughter
2006-10-21 . chapter 1
Two words. Keep. Writing. NOW! Okay, so that's three words. But seriously! Keep writing!
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