Love it! I wrote a fic similar to this called "I Miss You" but have yet to post it...Nice story!

Aw that's so sweet. I miss Sensei ever so much! I felt as if I was on Team 10 because my OC is so I felt as close to Asuma-sensei as Shikamaru-kun, Ino and Chouji (not that I could ever feel their pain). I cried that day so much, and I cried again for the next couple of days.

Thanks for writing it, it's good to see so many people write fics in memory of the sensei we've lost.

Nice...makes me wonder what Kurenai will really do once she finds out Asuma's dead.

owh..that was sad...i love the emotions you put in here so subtle yet heart-wrenching

The fic makes me felt heart-wrenching for both Asuma and Kurenai. Anyway, good job.

great story