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Reviews For: Through Another's Eyes

Goblin Cat KC
2007-12-17
ch 8,
abuseWow, excellent fic. I just stumbled on this one and I'm glad I did. With any luck I'll go back and review each chapter, but just for now, overall this is a fun and enthralling read. Usually I find myself skimming over huge chunks of story and, while Moordryd is still my fave, I'm actually interested in everyone in the story. Fun to see Moordryd trying to curb his own impulses to blend with the team, and awesome watching Decepshun putting up with a rider who isn't used to her.

I loved the dialogue between the Dragon Eye crew, too, about blowing up buildings and there being a rule made just for that occasion. It's a shame we don't get to see them fleshed out in the series or many stories, and these little additions are a nice touch.

That cliffhanger was an evil spot to leave us on, but oh so tantalizing! I look forward to new chapters (I know how busy life can get so I just hope to see them soon but will certainly wait for more) and I can't wait to see what else you do. *favorites*
Silvain Star
2007-09-25
ch 8,
abuseI love this. It's brilliant.
P.A.W.07
2007-05-30
ch 7,
abuseOh this is just too delicious. … I find this story so intriguing and incredibly cute for some reason. I love the beginning of this story … I was like ‘What the heck’ when you started it off with poor Moordryd tied to the wall like that … that is a real attention grabber. Also, you keep all the characters true to their real character from the show, and for some reason I love you’re little spurts of sarcasm like in chapter three: “He wanted to keep an eye on Artha Penn. People had this annoying tendency to escape when you weren’t watching.”

I really enjoy this story and I can’t wait for your next update. Also, this chapter was incredibly funny … oh poor Dragon Booster; your reputation is ruined forever. Hum? I wonder if Moordryd is going to have to fight … I sure hope so he’ll probably end up screaming like a girl. ^ ^
Gilana1
2007-04-05
ch 6,
abuseNot bad. Interesting storyline. Can't wait to read more, but I think it would be better with a little more description, and I wish I had seen more of Dragon Booster.
Silver Booster
2007-03-22
ch 6, anon.
abuseThis is SO FUNNY! I almost collapsed laughing when I first read it; add more chapters ASAP!!
Fyrfly23
2006-12-22
ch 6,
abuseNo, don't blame the homework, blame the teachers that give the homework, that's what I do. Drac chapter! Update Soon!
Dancing Flame's wind
2006-12-07
ch 5,
abuseUPDATE SOON PLEASE this is so good
Fyrfly23
2006-12-01
ch 5,
abuseThis was a drac and funny chapter! Moordryd, confused by Penn Racing and scared of Deth? Yep, those were signs of the Apocalypse. Newt Brain?(laughs hysterically) If there was a villain that called himself that, then that would be another sign of the Apocalypse... in Dragon City? Anyway, hope you update soon!
Fyrfly23
2006-11-19
ch 4,
abuseMoordryd trying to make Artha flirt with Kitt?! That was so funny! LOL! This was a drac chapter. I liked the way you introduced Deth in this chapter. Update Soon!
Dancing Flame's wind
2006-11-09
ch 4,
abusenice UPDATE SOON
Dancing Flame's wind
2006-10-26
ch 3,
abusenice chapter UPDATE SOON PLEASE
Fyrfly23
2006-10-22
ch 2,
abuseThat was so funny! If Moordryd does the "Please!" thing again as Artha, now that will be SO FUNNY! Update Soon!
Dancing Flame's wind
2006-10-22
ch 2,
abuseUPDATE SOON PLEASE
Dancing Flame's wind
2006-10-22
ch 1,
abuseNice chapter
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