I don't think I get it.

Sweet. I love this pairing.

I feel so ashamed to admit... I don't remember Kaddar at ALL. I thought he was a fanon thing when I first started reading on

On your story though; unless Kaddar cannot talk very well in the books, you need to run this through Word or some type of spell check device. There were grammar and spelling mistakes all over the place.

That however, is one of the few things that detracted from this fic.

I think you could have expanded more on Kalasin. TP has a tendency to deal in absolutes with the Tortallan characters and by subtly discussing societal influences, I think you could have something even more awesome than you do now.

Have a nice evening.

-Sunshine and Puppies

cute

I like it. A little slice of life. Cute.

Hmm, fun- fun.