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| Kira wolf354 2007-07-28 ch 1,  | abuseThis is good I hope you update soon! |
| yukibozu 2007-01-09 ch 2, | abusekinda confused...oh and is that spanish? what does it mean? |
| Nikooru-sama 2007-01-08 ch 2, | abuseUpdate soon! |
| sasusakufaves 2007-01-07 ch 2, | abuseplease update soon! good story btw ^-^ |
| Nikooru-sama 2006-10-26 ch 1, | abuseUpdate soon! You have a lot of spelling mistakes but the story is still really good so far! And get the capitals in people's names please! Update soon! |
| yukibozu 2006-10-24 ch 1, | abuseI like it, but i was wondering if you do spell check... |
| GlowlyInsanity 2006-10-23 ch 1, | abuseI like.Very good.So continu(I can't spell) |
| NymphetamineOverdose 2006-10-21 ch 1, | abuseInteresting idea. But you could use some time correcting typos and spelling errors. The format was also kind of complicated. But those things don't hurt the storyline. I like the storyline alot so far and hope to see more of it soon. |