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Foxluna
2009-12-11 . chapter 13
cool. i love this story so far.
i hope u update soon! please and thank u.
laters,
Fox
Foxluna
2009-12-11 . chapter 12
shouldnt she know how to heal with her Miko powers? and her powers can heal anyone i think no matter what world while them all's powers they can only use cure on each other.
well laters,
Fox
P.S.
by the way she should tell them about ALL of her past soon and them tell her ALL of their pasts soon too. wouldnt want Kagome to hurt herself much more and she can either get ride of the darkness inside of Riku or she can control the darkness that's inside of him and it'll accept her wholly cuz it is appart of him after all... all of him has to accpet her as his. will she use the term mate? and Sesshomaru should show up soon and be her big brother cuz that's how i think they'll be with each other, and Sesshy has to approve of him, and Riku show he can protect his 'mate'. BYE!!
Foxluna
2009-12-11 . chapter 9
Kagome should be with riku. and shouldnt they find out about her past soon? and she needs to get both her adopted children soon doesnt she? little Miyu and Shippou her little fox kit.
maybe Kirara too the little hell cat, or could she get one animal like sango? i could come up with the description and name if u want?
well laters,
Fox
Axel's Pyro Girl
2009-11-07 . chapter 13
Lemme guess... Vexen is the teacher for this class? Can I reccomend a librarian? Zexion. Zexion needs to be the librarian, and Demyx needs to be the Music teacher. And please, try to fit Xigbar in there too? It would be fun seeing Xiggy as a teacher. :P
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Poor Hayner.

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Axel's Pyro Girl
2009-11-07 . chapter 10
Sadistic ** - Saix? This is the only one I'm not sure of.

Fruit Loop - Marly, definately.

Emo ** - Zexion. Wah! Why does everyone accuse him of being emo? Maybe he likes his hair that way!

Sissy ** - Demyx. Or Dyme, as my buddeh likes to call him. Who else is a musical genius?
Axel's Pyro Girl
2009-11-07 . chapter 9
I was laughing so hard when Riku was aksing Sora why he didn't just kiss Kairi because of something my perverted my came up with.

"Azure eyes bugging out, The Keyblade Master grabbed two fist fulls of Riku’s shirt. Frantic, he asked: “I-Is she d-dumping me?!” Sora jerked him forward. Their noses were practically touching."

That just added to my theory. I was choking on air, I was laughing so hard. "Oh my god!Oh my god! Oh my god! Sora's gay! Buahahah! Sora-kun's HOMOSEXUAL!"

My mom just looked at me like I was insane.
Sapphire Destiny Rose
2009-10-30 . chapter 13
Hm cool, I love it! This fic is very unique and original nice work! update soon!
KagomexSesshomaru123321
2009-09-25 . chapter 13
good!
LOL-LIVElikeurOUTofLOLLIPOPS
2009-09-16 . chapter 6
WOOT! this is an awesome story so far (im only on chapter six) and I wanted to help you with the spellings I saw. Please dont be mad cause im corresting you, im just trying to help you get better at writing and spellung. although the only two things I really caught was when they said they were board you spelled it like that. when you really spell it like bored. and Day ja vu (which you got pretty close) is De Ja Vu and they put that weird symbol on top the E like they do in fiancee/fiance and a different one on top of the U. so far the story is great! keep it up!! ^.^
chibiprincess19
2009-09-08 . chapter 1
I like the length, its a really good story and i can't wait for more
Crystal Tsuki Tenshi
2009-08-18 . chapter 13
Oh! I LOVE IT! UPDATE SOON! PLEASE! This is one of THE BEST Kingdom Hearts/Inu Yasha fics EVER!
Arfa
2009-08-14 . chapter 13
good job, like your story, cant wait for the next chapter.
SlytherinLover45
2009-08-14 . chapter 13
UPDATE SOON!
I loved this chapter and I want to see Kagome face Riku in the next chapter!
Love the story so far!!
lo-gurl
2009-08-14 . chapter 1
Hey,sorry about before on the last reviews from twilight tenshi!


I was trying to log into my account but I guess my friends account was still on and I accidently used hers instead of mine!


I was trying to review on the chapters but I guess I made it looks like The-Twilight-tenshi reviewed ne?


Again sorry for that!
XxdizzyblondxX
2009-08-13 . chapter 13
AWSUMNESS
Carry on carry on carry on carry on
i lurv it so much
best story ive read in yonks
CONTINUE PLESE YOUR KILLING ME

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