Aag! You're corrupting me! I'm now apparently more of a NaruSasuNaru than SasuNaruSasu... It does make sense... O.o' I really loved this-no Sakura bashing, characters are (mostly) in character and I say (mostly) because you aren't Kishimoto-sensei... and WOW! I'm just loving it! Ha ha ha ha! I'l never look at skittles or Starburts the same way again! O.o

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Huh-- if Kakashi's been carrying bags of candy around in his jacket, how does he keep them from making noise when he's running? o.0 Frickin magic ninja.

Ahaha, I love that slogan!! You can't get much more gay than that! XD

Ok first off i loved both copies of this story there so cute, but i must say i like the last one better

Hehehe, that's awesome! What a great idea, and I think the second one was far better than the original too! I loved the whole kissing instead of fighting thing.

But you made unwrapping the starburst out to be so hard! It's really easy!

Okay...Wow...WOW. That had to be one of the greatest and most humorous stories I've read for these two. My god, you have a way of keeping them totally in character and yet still put them in situations like this! I think I love you. ;)

Seriously, I had a such a huge bursting fit of undignified case of the giggles that I thought I was gonna wet my pants! It's like 4 AM and I kept having to cover my mouth lest I wake up the entire household. So...thank you...SO much for writing this. Honsetly, if you ever stop writing comedic SasuNaru and vice versa I'll have to hunt you down, lol. Please...more...MORE...You've created a terrible monster haha. =D

Keep up the good work!
~ShadowyHarlequin

Ha! I loved the last line. That was awesome.
And I hate to say it, I tried it. Why not, I had a bunch of starbursts right by my desk. It is very hard to do. I almost got it, but I couldn't pull the last piece off. I blame that on the wrapper already being stuck to the candy. XD
Okay, yeah. *-_-
Good story! ;D

I liked the first one better..

Though, the second one was a lot sexier.. XD

This is great. The first one was pretty good, but the second one was definitely better ^_^

Sakura's reaction struck me as more... normal, I guess, in the second one as well. I mean, you're thirteen and your crush just kisses someone else right in front of you - you're going to be pretty hurt and upset!

i liked the rewrite best

X3 Awesome.

Nice story!

lololololololol this is really funny, both versions of them are

wonderful rewrite
it was a lot longer and had more details ^^