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| Restless Goddess 2007-11-17 ch 1, | abuseMagnificently done! Lewis Carroll and American McGee would be very proud. |
| You can call me 'Random' :D 2007-08-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseThough the whole ** aspect is creppy, it is VERY well written and realistic. I applaud your genius. --claps- |
| nikkilittle 2007-05-31 ch 1, | abuseStunning. And very sweet. You have nothing to apologize for. I've also written CheshireCat/Alice pairings with Cheshire still a cat, but your story is so carefully and so tastefully done, whereas I threw caution to the winds. I added this to my favorite stories list. |
| AutumnDynasty 2007-01-03 ch 1, | abuseI'm amazed you managed to make it work so well, and I adore you for it! It's powerful, beautiful and just...absolutly wonderful. For some reason, I particularly liked the second section. It showed the logic you can find in the madness particularly well, I thought. I congratulate you! |
| Olynara Sedai 2006-11-11 ch 1, | abuseHow on earth you managed that, I'll never imagine, so will have to be content by reading it and sighing. Very picturesque, somehow; and Alice decending into the depths of a kind of madness was skillfully done. Congrats on the pairing, but more precisely, the emotion. |
| TrunkZy 2006-10-27 ch 1, | abuseM that was so poetic. Like candy for the mind! "and Alice sits gingerly beside him on the excruciatingly white sheets." Your fixation with innocence is quite poetic, hon. I liked how you tried to explain something very complicated in a simple way. Worked out very, very well! Love Nat |
| Lani Lenore 2006-10-24 ch 1, | abuseI think you spent as much time explaining and nearly apologizing for this fic as you did writing it. But there's nothing here to apologize for. Disturbing? No not really. To be truthful, something graphic would indeed have bothered me, just because I don't take too well to animal/human pairings in the graphic realm. But this was nice in a way, to see it done so forwardly – without the sidestepping, which I am, in fact, guilty of. I like the thoughts and the way you explained them. Simple, but efficient. Alice's thoughts remain jumbled, skipping from one thought to the next. I like the point of perception you used, making the reader feel close to Alice and at the same time, far away. Perhaps she was never meant to have her happily ever after, and she has love feelings she can't understand for one she realizes she should not sanely love. But can one keep those feelings within? After all, the Cheshire was not just any animal. He was a personality, and in the end, was else does one fall in love with? |
| Kount Xero 2006-10-22 ch 1, | abuseI honestly don't mind any pairing, even when there wasn't a pairing in the initial work (or "such" a pairing). This one, is a good one; abstract, on the edge of insanity, and abstract (did I also mention that it was abstract?), something I can't really achieve. I LOVED the ending, "quietly offering to lead her to the midst of bloodshed". Nicely done! |