It's a really interesting idea. I love how you made the characters come across. It would be very interesting to see Goku's point of view as well.

Well-written. _

Aw. It's cute. I like it.

that was really cute

i really liked it

keep up the good work

keep making good stories like this

it warms my heart to read stories like this.

It's great -i mean it.

Aw. I like this, it's short and sweet and it works. Well done.