Wow, really good and powerful story.

Thanks for writing,

Ron

Nice read. I wish you'd included in some other incidents as well. One of them is the time when Lockhart had been proved to be a fake and another one would be the number of books written about Harry Potter and his against Voldemort when he was just a baby.

this is very good you should continue

An odd topic, but extremely well written.

Thank you for writing it, I enjoyed reading it.

Just imagining Hermione doing the Killing Curse is mind-blowing!

KUTGW,

Noreen

This was quite good. Great idea and well written.

Holy hell...O_O Wow...

A lot more sad than one would think killing a spider would be. Nicely done.-demonicnargles

Well done! You portrayed Hermione's emotions very well.

Deep.
I applaud you

nice

I read this way back and forgot to leave a review. The way you describe the psychological toll of using the curse reminds me of its use in "After the End.
I have always liked Hermione but felt she was misused in HBP and DH. Any story focussing on her is worth a look, in my opinion.

I felt you got her characterization and motivations down well, and the ending was terribly sad, which I'm sure you were going for. The end of innocence is the thing I most dread for my own children.

I'm lost of words. Your Story is more than Fantastic. Please continue it as soon as possible.

Hate that intense always has a price.

Wonderful story. Your reflexion on Hermione, her personality and relation with books and knowledge are interesting and right (or at least, I think so). The end is just perfect, horrible and realistic. I enjoyed reading it all very much, so than you for your story _

Beautiful until the end... when it goes beautiful and sad (but right nonetheless).

Ciao!