|Reviews for Dandelions|
| StarTrekObsessed 12/26/06 . chapter 12
AGH! Crawford is dead? Is this one of those Kirk-esque moments of kill-him-and-resurrect-him-later-for-best-dramatic -effect? If it is, I won't complain. I have a feeling it isn't, though... And it's sort of cool that you did it. Sort of (nothing 'sort of' about it, I suppose)forces the rest of Schwarz to fend for itself. *Sniff*.
And I'm laughing my head off right now that you're doing another part of this arc... After all that talk of endings and terror and finishing plot twists and things... I shudder to consider what you were planning on doing before deciding to continue with another story. Were they all going to be killed by Esset and go out with a bang? Or a sob, depending on who you ask?
Never mind. Such thoughts aren't helping my fragile state of mind, which has been blasted by Christmas and my puppy (note: never get a Jack Russell if you are a lazy sod, like myself) has been an unholy terror.
At any rate, my dad is getting curious about what I'm doing on the net with my laptop in the dark livingroom, so...
| Flash Roses 12/24/06 . chapter 12
Okay, I'll admit it... I cried like a baby for this entire chapter! D: But...*wibble*... Brad! And Nagi! But the news that there will be another section is...well... a great Christmas gift, really! :D :D
P.S. Sorry I haven't reveiwed in awhile! I've been reading though! :D
| TarotCard87 12/24/06 . chapter 12
"Final part of this arc, final part of this arc" and nooww lol. I won't argue! More for me to read right? So definitely looking forward to the next as usual. And have I mentioned recently that I love your portrayal of Farfarello/Jei(now) and Schu? Hee! Hurry with the next bit!
| TheInflictedFinger 12/22/06 . chapter 12
I actually shed a tear when Brad died... I mean..my god. Is the world to end tomorrow at sunrise?
-looks about self with shifty eyes-
Damn well hope not! I still have to finish reading this wonderful piece of ficness!
This sounds strange, but Im so happy you made me die twice!
This chapter was...Rather emotionally draining. But in a good way. In the "Omg it feels like everything Ive been reading up to now, this actual WORLD inside of my head thats been being created as this story is updated, is like...falling to pieces..."
GAH! I cant type anymore right now but I wish I could..my right hand is having tremors and its irratating me with all of the fixing typoness.
please update again soon!
| StarTrekObsessed 12/21/06 . chapter 11
Oho, spat in your mother's drink did you? Hehe.
Anyway. I like this chapter. Back to suedo-psychotic Farfarello. Lotsa fun :P
And it has plot! :O Shocking. In a good way. Lol.
Sorry, I'm incoherent right now... I'm on my second cup of coffee and I'm dog tired (four hours sleep last night)and the lights are very dim, my mother is nattering at some friend of her's on the phone... my puppy has been running me into the ground today, and my boyfriend and I broke up last night. But it's all good.
Not like I'm digressing here or anything... -_-
Poor Schu, and poor Nagi and Crawford, I'm sure, wherever they are. I hate the thought of this story ending : The term "I'm considering endings" sent me into terror. And... not that I'm hinting or anything... but a sappy Schu/Far moment sometime in the near future wouldn't be sorely unappreciated. *eyelash batting*
Of course, I leave it to the discretion of the Great Authoress Goddess. :)
| TheInflictedFinger 12/21/06 . chapter 11
-dies of happiness from update-
Ah, thankyou for clarifying, I do so love it when authors of fandom further enhance their characters with their own personal little 'what if' quirks.
-shivers in happiness-
I love it how Farfarello is working with Tink now, even if she is a bloody bitch.
It's brilliant...just brilliant. And I must have more! please update soon!
| TarotCard87 12/12/06 . chapter 10
Chuckles You evil, evil woman. Second cliffy in a row! Biatch! lol As always, eagerly awaiting your next chapter.
| StarTrekObsessed 12/12/06 . chapter 10
Oh, I love cliffhangers... *insert sarcastic tone here* :)
Not a bad fight scene, actually. I stayed up half an hour past my bedtime last night trying to finish this short story I started yesterday morning... and I *totally* empathise about writing the fights (one of which was the second-to-last scene of my story).*_* It seems so easy in movies, someone rolls over there, throws a punch here, and it's over. But no... writers have to literally choreograph step by step. I don't understand people who write action books. Yech. And you're go in the back of your head "Just kiss already, we don't care about plot or logicalness!" Heheh. But honestly, good job.
Anyway, my fam and I are going to town tomorrow, so I have to pack, and then help my bro put up the christmas tree, feed my sister, put sheets on my bed, so on and so forth... as though you actually want to know, lol.
So, many hugs, and may Weiss chibis forever appear dancing in your dreams (or hot bishies getting it on, depending on your mood, I suppose. Right now I myself would prefer the latter :S)
| TheInflictedFinger 12/12/06 . chapter 10
-falls over at cliffhanger-
B-but...-sobs- so cruel!
-grins- But I loved this chapter, so awesome. Im rather worried about Schuschu though... I hope the enemy's telepath didn't hurt him...too much.
I like the cockroaches... Is Farfie supposed to have a phobia of them or something? Or is it just the enemy's telepath's little quirks?
Anyways, hope you update again soon! Im so excited! And very happy about the quick updates, It makes me so happy! happy happy happy!
| StarTrekObsessed 12/8/06 . chapter 9
Poor bishies. I think the last followed-through romantic moment was when the dread L-word came about, wasn't it? Either way, sucks to be them.
I have to say, the plot seems very surreal to me in the face of the interpersonal drama. Something will be said about the next Esset-mutilating operation and I go, What, they're trying to do something with Esset?
Not a fault, be assured. I like character driven works far better than plot drive.
| TarotCard87 12/7/06 . chapter 9
Gah! Where to begin..
Poor Far for being all angry with the American newspaper headlines, and then again for the stupid twit that he saved from being raped. And stupid Crawford ruining that little sweet moment when Far and Schu woke up together. Too cute.
And evil, evil! you for the cliffhanger! Rawr. Want more!
| TheInflictedFinger 12/7/06 . chapter 9
-smiles happily at response-
Yayness, hope you update again soon, Im a bit drowsy so I cant make it more complex of a review...
| TheInflictedFinger 12/6/06 . chapter 8
O_O I just randomnly visited for the first time in a couple months because I wanted to look if they had updated the wallpapers and Im like,"Well, Ive also waited about a year since I last read Weiss fanfiction, and of course farfie is my favorite character so I typed his name into the search and lo and behold here is your story! Not this one, the first in this series.
GAH! I look at the dates and want to sob in happiness, you updated not too long ago, and that means you're still updated this story, right right ?
Please say you are... E it makes me cry
| StarTrekObsessed 2nd review 11/30/06 . chapter 1
OK, I just feel the need to review again...
For starters: I loved the scene with Far and Schu... yummy, and aw worthy.
And I loved this phrase (specifically the last part): 'All of us were like that, like an emigration of homeless beggars.' Not sure why, but it just really appeals to me.
And the names!: The lack of 'Farf'. Don't know why I didn't bring this up before, since I've been thankful for it since the start of 'Birth of a Monster', but the name 'Farf' just bothers the hell out of me. It sounds so absurd and, really, like a big shaggy unpleasant dog (I know a dog by that description whose name is similar, so maybe that's it). Anyway, I just appreciate 'Far'.
By the same note: Schuldig. Versus Schuldich. Three cheers for the proper use of German words! (Although you do spell Schwarz 'Swartz', but the team name is used a lot less than Schu's is, and it's never bothered me as much.)
I think that mostly covers all the things I wanted to say... oh, except 'shuttered' instead of 'shuddered'. There is a difference, the former being an action concerning the use of a shutter, the latter being the action you're meaning.
Now I have to run...
| StarTrekObsessed 11/29/06 . chapter 8
Well, I don't know if you're losing other people's reviews, but mine aren't going anywhere (I know, I didn't review last chapter, *guilt guilt*, but I was in a rush). And I haven't read this chappy yet (I saved it to a document for later reading, because it's rather bad to have an ff dot net page open around this mostly homophobic/fic-bashing family) but I'm going to as soon as I'm done washing the dishes... and I'm sure it's as lovely as all the previous ones.