If Namine is Sora's older sister, and she's dating Roxas, Kairi's older brother, and Kairi's dating Sora... INCEST!

SHE DIED? YOU KILLED OFF KAIRI? WHY? THEY STARTED DATING AND ALL THAT, AND YOU JUST KILL HER OFF OUT OF NOWHERE? HMMPH!

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! NOOOOOO OMG SAD ENDING WHYYY? but yeah i think that ending made this a pretty great story. good job :))

oh gawd you are sooo evil! jk...

sad.

beautifully written, but so dastardly sad

so sweet... :)

but then it was like BAM! and it was sad... T-T

:( lol

Im going to say what everyone else does: sad and sweet/cute.

I really liked it )

wah

why are all the earlly ones soo sad...

Aww, you twisted the story! But in a good way... Sora/Kairi forver!

WHY? *soB*

very well written, and a good idea

but id like to point out it was a bit odd for a sibling-in-law to marry another...sibling-in-law

but that was the only not so great thing...everything else about the story was great :]

if Roxas and Namine got married and Roxas is related to Kairi and Namine is related to Sora then that means after the wedding Kairi and Sora would be sister and brother and laws so thats so weird that they got married.

great story

and extremely depressing

loved it :)

kudos to you

This was so very cute and sad. Perfect!

Yep. I told myself to brace for it but no! I just HAD to loose myself in the happiness and kinda funiness and the other things, and then, in one sentence BOOM! It all changed. It was so tragically good. Tragoodness. :D My new made up word!

But seriously, it was a tearjerker (well for me anyway xD) but it was just...wow. I got lost in it. :P Really, really, great story! Awesome. :]

OMG!

I loved this story to much! It was very touching! _

The ending was so sad though, poor Kairi (. Lol it still strikes me funny that roxas punched sora in the eye. Poor Sora!

Great Job!