Dude, that was so freakin awesome! I can totaly relate to Katara's half...well exept the bending part. And I love fire! Gosh, no wonder I love this pairing so much! Great job! If you update, I'll read!

very nice very prose-y-y *twitch* i like it maybe you'll continue...*wink*

OMG I absoulutly adored this story with a passion- this shows that you have some excellent talent on your hands here! Wow i am absoulutly amazed! I love Zuko's description of Fire. 10 out of 10

excellent word choice and description of emotion. i hope your going to continue.