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Milky Way FTW
2009-08-20 . chapter 1
Wow, I had to read this over three times to finally get what it meant. ^^; When I did, though, it turned out to be a really great read, one worth contemplating. Along with the whole: ShikaIno FTW! kinda thing. XD Great little story; you should seriously consider extending it. :)
mood ink
2009-04-10 . chapter 1
nyahahaha, it would be really nice if you made a sequel to this! to know what happened after.. =)
JaliceLove
2008-09-12 . chapter 1
LOL I remember this from FRIENDS. LOL (: haha. Awesome
La Mariposa3795
2008-08-06 . chapter 1
HOLY CRAP! That was so AWESOME! I'm so glad I stumbled upon this...you should really consider making a second chapter...even just ONE...just to tie up the loose ends or something...heehehee!
wowthecrowd
2007-11-17 . chapter 1
hello please add a second chapter please and ill be your beta if you that desprate
watergirl
2007-09-08 . chapter 1
YOU HONESTLY MUST MAKE A SEQUEL! THIS IS SO DAMN GOOD!
Nukumi
2007-09-07 . chapter 1
Made of awesome! Best mistake I've ever heard. I'd like to see a picture of all three of their faces when he said that XD
Jenny
2007-06-02 . chapter 1
YOU MUST WRITE A FOLLOW-UP! What a great short story but you shouldn't leave us hanging, it's great, really it is andI. LOVE. IT. thank you.
Arkana
2007-01-04 . chapter 1
That was so wonderful, I didn't expect that little twist at all. You did a great job building everything up into what seemed like a perfect wedding... only to have things crashing down with that one line, "My name is Temari".
anime09
2006-11-20 . chapter 1
Awesome! :P
Efimia
2006-11-15 . chapter 1
THAT WAS INSANE!!
man, that was really good keep writing
what a twist!
Did I mention that was totally insane?
TheLovelyNatalieRose
2006-10-28 . chapter 1
You MUST continue this! IT is so good! It was awesome possum! At first I was kinda confuzzled, cuz I'm kinda slow... But then I reread it! And now I get it! Yay! Anyway, just continue... please...
tomboy14
2006-10-27 . chapter 1
wow! you should make this a chapter story! it totally freaked me out! I love InoShika or ShikaIno!!
MystiKoorime
2006-10-25 . chapter 1
Heyy Heyy

O_O Omg! Shikamaru made a BIG mistake. Haha. YAY for Shika-Ino ness!

Great job

MystiK
sneakerluvvin
2006-10-24 . chapter 1
Oh, this is great man! You should definietly continue. I'm so adding this on my my faves!!
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