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Princess-Lazy-Chan
2010-01-05 . chapter 6
so awesome ive been looking every where for an epsiode by episode one and i like it how it chaned to danile as a girl its cool as and the events change a bit i love it cant wait for more if you are still working on it? anyway its exellent
Asil tark
2009-07-12 . chapter 6
Fantastic! Cant wait 2 c how its go 2 play out the episode hathor. Keep up the good work.
Gooey Puddle
2008-04-02 . chapter 6
please update soon
Gooey Puddle
2008-03-29 . chapter 6
Please update this wonderful fic soon. I really love it and i think it is very original.
Voldie's Pet Snitch
2007-06-12 . chapter 6
Good story! Maybe you could do a oneshot of where Danielle and Sha're either getting back together or when they met.
Lady Salazar
2007-06-02 . chapter 6
Oh... neat. There are... what, two examples of fem!Daniel (that I could find)?

That said, most of what's written so far is verbatim of the show. That's not bad really, as it wouldn't change overly much right from the beginning, only slowly as it begins to branch out... but you ought to at least try and fiddle with the dialogue, so it's not exactly the same, rather than just adding something in here and there.

And second, the other thing - I don't know if you just don't like the particular episode "The First Commandment" but you should have put more description in it. Yes, we've seen the show, but still try and put in movement and expression.

What you've shown of Danielle is interesting, and promises a good story further down the line. I'll be anticipating it.

~Lady Salazar
Sahin
2007-03-21 . chapter 6
Good update. I really enjoy this.
Falling Right Side-Up
2007-03-20 . chapter 6
YAY! I was beginning to think you'd abandoned the fic. Hope you update soon!
A Brighter Dawn
2007-01-15 . chapter 5
Interesting idea. I really like it so far, and look forward to more! : )
Falling Right Side-Up
2007-01-14 . chapter 5
An Update! Bless you! I'd begun to think you had abandoned the fic. I'm so glad that you didn't. I hope you update again, soon!
Masked Masquerader
2006-12-04 . chapter 4
Well...I must say, you've got me hooked. Hooked enough to have procrastinated on my last paper for European Foreign Policy class! Excellent story so far. I'm really looking forward to seeing how you do for the rest of the series, since you did say you plan on going at least through season 8. That's gonna be a lot! Looking forward to it. I did see what some of the other reviews have said about Danielle maybe being a mary-sue...I see how they can think that, I'll admit I thought it too...but if you say that'll come into play later, I'll trust you with that. Other than that, I really have no complaints about this so far! Keep going with it, you've got at least one reader.
Falling Right Side-Up
2006-11-27 . chapter 4
very interesting. I really hope you continue to update despite the lack of reviews!
D. Ho
2006-11-20 . chapter 2
Cool, wonder why I've never seen that idea used before?
Samandjackforever
2006-11-20 . chapter 1
cool! ya know what's even cooler...my name is Danielle LOL!
Sean
2006-11-19 . chapter 3
This is very cool, write more soon please
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