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carolinesayer
2009-11-02 . chapter 2
aw!! :D that was brilliant! thankyou! xx
Majestik Moose
2009-05-23 . chapter 2
Great fic! I loved Sam's innocence and confusion. :)
fabilimah
2009-04-28 . chapter 2
this story is really cute I love hurt!sam and protective!sam
and this time they are youngers aw cute!
Re-Used
2008-06-03 . chapter 2
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Hee hee hee...


Coolios.
annj
2008-05-17 . chapter 2
More than okay, actually. I liked the story a lot.
lucym
2008-05-14 . chapter 2
Nice fic. :)

You made Sam so cute! lol, I loved how he was worried that his father would kill him + the part in the car where he thinks Dean doesn't like him anymore. You always make me want to hug these characters and then I remember they're not real. :(

I wish I had a real life sized Dean, you know... without clothing. Ahem...

Anyway, I liked the John part. I read in the A/N that you were worried about that but it suited the story very well. Again, I love how you write John. I really hate it when authors write him as a hardass making it look like he barely likes his sons.

Also, a big + for making Dean have flaws! I think it's realistic that Dean would have put girls before Sam once in a while and it took something so disastrous to make Dean realise who is really important - you've written that very well.

I don't really have any criticisms... um... yeah, that seems to be the case with all your fics. I suppose the only thing I can think of is that it'd have been cool to see a bit of Dean's POV of the situation, although I don't really care, it was fine the way it was.

Btw, thankyou for replying to my reviews. Not many people do that, lol. That's nice of you.

I really liked the part where Dean cries and Sam's completely shocked and uncomfortable with his brother's actions. I think it's suitable for the age you wrote him within this story. Overall, another excellent fic! Love how you write the brothers. :)
alyssaaa
2008-03-27 . chapter 2
sammy is just to cute =)
I like Dean and john too . Anyway, GREAT job =D
funkyhigh
2008-02-09 . chapter 2
Another awesome fic! i think i'm just gonna go through and read them all!
Debbie C
2008-01-25 . chapter 2
Very nice story. I like stories when the boys are young. Trying to hide the injury seems like something a young boy would do. Nice job!
poohbear123
2008-01-15 . chapter 2
GREAT STORY
KatieLB
2007-09-20 . chapter 2
I thought you wrote the john part just fine... I liked it all... another great story...good job
KatieLB
2007-09-20 . chapter 1
That large amount of blood is never a good thing especially for weesammy... another great story... looking forward to the rest
DCA
2007-09-20 . chapter 2
The Dca would be all over the winchesters if a kid cam in with a stab wound that bad not just let him go
lLlADF
2007-09-15 . chapter 2
Oh, I liked it!
RedDragen
2007-08-22 . chapter 2
I would love to see what you do next with this story.
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