I had my doubts when I started reading your story, but I've been proven wrong :)

you have a good writing style, and the plot has been fairly engaging, even when you're focusing more on character development/interaction . . . keep it up! and update!

I have to say, the idea of Mpreg freaks me out and 99% of the time, I don't enjoy it. On saying that, your story is excellent. It has a believable premise and really nice interaction with all the other characters. I particularly like how you are dealing with the Richard dynamic. Too often, stories have him portrayed as a villain or he is the one who steps aside. I quite like the fact that you have Clark recognising that the ship has sailed. All, in all I am glad that I looked past the Mpreg summary to find this gem of a story. I definitely class it in the 1%, so you should be glad, that you convinced me.

Keep up the excellent writing.

Cap ;)

*Pops in, has a look around* Ah, no update? *flips back to chapter 1 and re-reads again* ;)

Great story! Please update soon.

Very intersting, hopefully everythings is ok with the babies!! UPDATE SOON!!

ooh, cliffhanger!
this is a great story, but you need to consider having a beta to fix up all the little grammatical mistakes. it's great writing, but it interrupts the flow of the piece when there are lots of spelling mistakes or words used incorrectly.

Oh, no. What happens next? Please write more soon!

Wow!
I was on the edge of my seat the whole time!
Excellent!
And OMG! What a cliffhanger!

Now, I am breathlessly waiting!

Great chapter! I can't wait for more!

Wow! Great update! I loved the way you explained how they all work together with the watchtower. Now, what's wrong with him!?! Can't wait to find out! :)

needa watch the spelling and grammar- commas and full stops. and "fas sard" is spelt facade.
great writing apart from that :)

Hahahahahahaha

That is funny!
I loved it!
Awesome work!

thanks for this fun chapter

LOL!

LOL! I laughed my butt off with the last 3 lines! roflmfao! :D Loved the chapter. Thank you.