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| Skoteinos Metamfiezomai 2008-01-23 ch 1,  | abuseAh, sad. I enjoyed it... but it was definitely sad. You portray both Sara and Grissom very accurately, especially, IMO, in this piece- I would imagine that it would be rather hard to write their emotions correctly in a situation like this. ~IGC t DM |
| Graymoon74 2007-12-13 ch 1, | abuseFantastic =) |
| lvgsrcsi 2007-09-01 ch 1, | abuseI have just read all of your stories and had to tell you YOU RocK! Cant wait for the next one. |
| Forensic Nurse 2007-06-04 ch 1, | abuseBrillantly written!! Thanks! If only this would happen ... |
| Quill-32 2007-03-19 ch 1, | abuseI like this very much. They're both quite human in their reactions, and I like how they moved from division to the same path without really talking about it. And I appreciate that it was a false alarm; far more realistic. The last line is perfect. |
| ayesha-s 2007-03-01 ch 1, | abuseoh that was so sweet!! love it! |
| Kristafied 2007-02-10 ch 1, | abuseVery cute. I like Grissom's reactions and how it plays off the priest in the case. Good characterizations and I like how you write their relationship - subtle not secretive, per se. |
| nameless 2006-12-14 ch 1, anon. | abuse:) Absolutely BEAUTIFUL...I love all your work! I especially appreciate how you're able to keep them in character. I get SO EXCITED whenever I see you've written something new or update an old one...keep it up! |
| Just Thinking 2006-11-16 ch 1, | abuseIt could happen! You should continue this. |
| michelle 2006-11-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseLove it! Will there be a follow up? |
| DaVinci13 2006-10-28 ch 1, | abuseHa! I swear to God the first thing I thought of was... Harry Potter. :P But hey, you mentioned it, so you can't blame me. Anyway, awesome story! I love it. It's so sweet and just... I dunno. I think it depicts Sara and Grissom really well. And I liked when they found out she wasn't pregnant. Well, didn't like it because it was sad, but liked it because it was so perfect, and their reactions were both touching. Anyway, again, great story - keep up the awesome work! :D |
| Solstice4 2006-10-28 ch 1, | abuseOh man, you just keep getting better with this. Keep going with CSI - I have as much fun reading your stuff as I do watching the show. You should write for them. |
| Future Miss CSI60 2006-10-26 ch 1, | abuseAWW! This is so cute! and I love the little "knut. I swear to god, my sis and I could have SWORN Sara looked pregnant during the fifth episode! But yeah, we're probably wrong again, like you said. *sigh* I can't help but wish for a Grissom-Sara pretend fetus...gotta love the 'Geeklove Zygote!' |
| jenbachand 2006-10-26 ch 1, | abuseAw. I've seen a couple stories running along similar spoiler lines. Yours is cute and well written. It also could have come directly out of my life of late. Thanks for a wonderful story. |
| Outdoorgeek 2006-10-26 ch 1, | abuseI absolutely love this story. You've captured the maturity of both Grissom and Sara and the glimpse you've given of their evolving relationship rings very true. The acceptance of each other's silences and the strong level of trust which are so inherent and subtle in relationships is beautifully portrayed here. BRAVA! As long as you are willing to post what you write, I'll be more than happy to read it. Thanks so much for a superb story. |