Bleh. There's always somebody who does those rescues. I don't have this game, but I can't stand to leave anyone in danger in games like these.

Oh man... you just made me feel so guilty... I usually do the missions that say, "Save My Baby!" though...

An excellent oneshot.

Awesome story. It really makes a person guilty. For a Lucario-Rank or Master Rank, I really must be growing soft... I just did an E-Rank. Great job, and Korsan's parting response made me actually laugh, because when he sucked his claw, it was probably to get rid of the blood. ^^

I'm happy to say i have a diamond rank rescue team and still occaisionally take E rank missions, or D rank escorts.

I must say that pidgey was rather evil

I now feel bad becaus I take the missions with the awesome rewards poor pichu.

Dear God that Poor Little Pichu, But Unfornately its a true thing that most only work for money. but to ignore a plee for help, to save a young baby and have no one help her thats cold really cold . And dont even get my Started on that damn Zangoose, who not only had the Gal to kill little Kala but to turn around and criticize her mother too. I hope someone kills him in the most painful way possible.

I love this little Short Story too bad its only a one shot. I would love to see that Zangoose get torn limb from limb.

This is so sad! Y'know they shoulda do it anyway!

This had to be the saddest story I've ever read, doesn't help you picked one of my favorite Pokemon to succumb to such a sad fate. Great job.

Yeesh, you'd figure that a Raichu could make it through Tiny Woods...

But seriously, this story is pretty dramatic, especially with that plot twist at the end...

The only bit of constructive criticism I can think of is that you may want to capitalize the Pokemon species' names, i.e. "pichu" should be "Pichu". Other than that, it's a great story.

You made me so guilty, now I'm going to have to go and play some low-level missions. ;_; But i usually do the "Save my child!" ones.
Poor Kala...

.../feels incredibly, incredibly, horribly, terribly, utterly, and some other synonym guilty./
...Dear god almighty, someone save that bloody Pichu.
/bursts into tears/
I'm going to do an E rank mission now. BRB.
/Amazing story, by the by./

Yes... That's all too true (though it hurts to admit it.) I usually take these "Save my child!" missions; I'm such a softie for a Lucario Rank AERODACTYL!!
This also adds to my "Reasons I Like Seviper Better Than Zangoose" list. I'm sure a Seviper would have done the same thing as Korsan, but Zangoose are still creepier in my opinion...

Wow...that was...wow

Kind of dark near the ending, but otherwise good.

Lazy teams...so what if it was easy? In any game I've played involving missions (this one included) I've taken every mission I could. So what if it's pay was low and you could probably finish in five minutes, I'd take it!

Dark Mystery Dungeon fics are so rare... And, it appears, good! I like this one...

Just a thought, wouldn't a Raichu be able to go through Tiny Woods?? I mean, come ON! Pathetic cowards...

Eek! *goes and does an easy mission* :)

Poor pichu Kala