Well, I know I should have read it sooner but i didn't found the time to read the second chapter. now that i did (even though i have to work in like 9 hours) i want to say that I loved it (and I was in there too!) well kisses and give a kiss to Paco too

Well I'd just love to give you fun-flame like I usually do, but since this is a bit more serious than norml, I'll refrain from doing so. Ain't I nice now? XD

Anyway, Paco is still a Mutt *sticks out tongue* but I'm glad he helped you. Can't really say that much about it since these are your feelings and all, so yeah.

One thing though...
ANNA?!?!?!?!?!

-Moony-

I'm glad you have Paco to help you. This was a very raw peice of work with alot of emotion in it and it was beautifully writen; i hope it helped you, along with Paco.

Love ya and i'll speak to you later

very good story Lien, and your forcing me to review this with the chance of you coming online later. I would of done it anyway. Almost made me cry, it was very cute.

Rest in peace, tycho,
Britt

I think it was very well writen so far, and I get that it's hard for you to write this. Take your time with updating (wow, did I just say that? O.o;;)

Moony

*hugs* i bet it is hard to write... but it'll still good! You know that i like it even though it's sad... is the 2nd chapter whatyou was writting the other day??

Update when you can

Poor Pan. This one tugs at your heart...i loved it. Keep thise chapters coming. Keep up the awesome work. laters