 The Painted Lady 2006-12-17 . chapter 11What a great and original story so far! I can't beleive that I never caught this and read it! Now, for the second time in two days, you've been able to transport me into an exciting world with rich and beleiveable charecters. Your storytelling is really top-notch, and I'm incredibly impressed. You write Seshomaru so well, that I swear you've met him in real life. I will eagerly await anything that you write in either this or Botanist and the Beast, for both are vividly detailed and a beautiful peice of art. |
 Arvael 2006-12-09 . chapter 11Now that I've finished the published chapters, I still have one BIG question in my head: How come I've never seen this fic before? [panic]
Anyway, I like this story, like your other one :D And playing in the 'future' (I mean nowadays xD) makes it just more interesting :)
I hope you'll be able to update soon ;) |
 White Alchemist Taya 2006-11-11 . chapter 11wow, that was so mind blowing!
*blushes* |
 White Alchemist Taya 2006-10-29 . chapter 10lolz, very nice.
very nice indeed.
this is a good fic.
shame no-one seems to read it. |
 White Alchemist Taya 2006-10-29 . chapter 9she's leaving??
is she leaving to spain??
great chapter man.
fantastic story. |
 White Alchemist Taya 2006-10-29 . chapter 8damn, that obviously hurts.
very nice chapter. |
 White Alchemist Taya 2006-10-29 . chapter 7dang, that is really amazing.
oh wow. truely. |
 White Alchemist Taya 2006-10-29 . chapter 6that is sad.
her life was so hard.
it probably still is.
great chapter. |
 White Alchemist Taya 2006-10-29 . chapter 5that was a long tale.
very long.
it kinda made me a bit sleepy.
oh yea, there is a few spelling mistakes. |
 White Alchemist Taya 2006-10-29 . chapter 4interesting. the story beginnings, i suppose. |
 White Alchemist Taya 2006-10-29 . chapter 3sesshoumaru is mad?
is he going to kill her?? but rinee is in the apartment too. |
 White Alchemist Taya 2006-10-29 . chapter 2lolz, the terrible stink...a nice way to put it i suppose.
nice chapter. |
 White Alchemist Taya 2006-10-28 . chapter 1o such a cool beginning!
awesome! fighting in the first chapter. |