(Overall Review) Aya’s a sweetheart! You definitely created the perfect daughter for Ash and Misty. The Pokeshippy conflict was very interesting, too, and I can understand why Misty ran off, though I can also understand Ash’s resentment. It was great to see how Ash and Misty matured through the story, coming to terms with the past for the sake of their little girl. It proves they are responsible enough to be Aya’s parents, and also to patch up their own rocky relationship. Well done!

I Luv The Ending It Is So Happy And ROMANTIC!

Ash's reaction is realistic

aaw!! Ash is a 'FATHER'! i wonder waht's going to happen in the next chapter well the only way im going to find out is to keep reading! ^.^

0.0... WHAT HAPPEND??!! why is there a little girl with Misty? is it Ash and Misty's baby or or or ? never mind im going to read the next chapter! >.

MOG! wher did Misty go? do not tell me i will read the next chap. aw ^.^ Misty and Ash are together!

that was one of the best fics i have ever read! great job

Great story! I loved it! I am a huge Ash and Misty fan! Keep it up!

Cool story! can't wait to see what happens in the next story you write (update soon Plz)

Waah! this was great! maybe you can make a sequel or something?!!

Amazing story! Excellent job! You should do a sequel to this story!

Ash/Misty FOREVER!

Another great story! I read this a few weeks ago, but never had the chance to review, which, I should have. :P What I really enjoy about your stories is that they are realistic, and the way the characters express their feelings is amazing. You rock! Peace!

I lOVED THIS FIC! Haha Aya is so cute! What happened to Ash's roomate though? The ending was so sweet!

I came up with another thought today as I was listening to the radio. I don't really know the song, but the song that fits this fic perfectly has the chorous go like: And if you touch me like this and hold me like that, it's been so long but it's all coming back to me now. I thought that the song really fits the thought of the fic as it talks about how the feeling came back and really left an impact so that they felt that they should try to pick up what they left off. Not exactly where, but start the relationship again. Like towards the end the song has: ...and we can forgive and forget, but it's all coming back to me now! I really like how the song fits the fic perfectly. And I'd like to thank you for keeping such an old fic up for so long. It really was worthwhile to read. Thank you.

Well, first off, I don't know how it feels to finish a fic because whenever I start on a project (except for when I was in school) I never really got around to finishing it. Also, I think that Ash should have forgiven Misty even if he didn't love her anymore because if you hold hate in your heart, you hurt yourself more than you'd realize because it slowly eats away at your heart until it's basically empty and hollow. Anyway, I thought that it was quite good, though I figured that Misty was pregnant in the first chapter because just of how things were going on. I figured that she would be leaving, just by reading because she wouldn't open up and use the tool Try Trust. If you want to know exactly what I mean on that, then email me, otherwise just think of it as an action. Thanks for the good fic. I enjoyed it quite a bit.