Just a short note to say that I think that was beautiful. The whole thing. Just off to read the sequel, and my thanks
Paul

On a scale of 1 to 10, I give your story a 20, "good dailogue, very dramatic, heartwarming". I also liked your idea for the wedding, very accurate. I hope you like this review. Keep Up the good work

This was good. I actually read this several months ago but never reviewed it. I'd forgotten the name and author and everything. I searched for it again recently so I could read it again. This story is very well written. I found it to be depressing at first but as the story went along I couldn't help but love it.
The only thing I saw wrong was the occasional grammatical errors.

beautiful!

the magebear thinks that's the first time it's said that in a review. but it truly is. even now, the magebear feels tears threatening.

cc-wise, the magebear can only mention a few minor typos (inevitable) and the fact that a toddler like aya wouldn't be mature enough to realize they should have some time alone. the situation would have been more than enough for her to go with her instincts- that's what the magebear was expecting, anyway. but meh, as the magebear said, beautiful. full of emotion, drama, romance- everything the summary promises and more. bravo!

(Overall Review) Aya’s a sweetheart! You definitely created the perfect daughter for Ash and Misty. The Pokeshippy conflict was very interesting, too, and I can understand why Misty ran off, though I can also understand Ash’s resentment. It was great to see how Ash and Misty matured through the story, coming to terms with the past for the sake of their little girl. It proves they are responsible enough to be Aya’s parents, and also to patch up their own rocky relationship. Well done!

I Luv The Ending It Is So Happy And ROMANTIC!

Ash's reaction is realistic

aaw! Ash is a 'FATHER'! i wonder waht's going to happen in the next chapter well the only way im going to find out is to keep reading! .

0.0... WHAT HAPPEND? why is there a little girl with Misty? is it Ash and Misty's baby or or or ? never mind im going to read the next chapter! .

MOG! wher did Misty go? do not tell me i will read the next chap. aw . Misty and Ash are together!

that was one of the best fics i have ever read! great job

Great story! I loved it! I am a huge Ash and Misty fan! Keep it up!

Cool story! can't wait to see what happens in the next story you write (update soon Plz)

Waah! this was great! maybe you can make a sequel or something?

Amazing story! Excellent job! You should do a sequel to this story!

Ash/Misty FOREVER!