its a good story and i wish you would carry it on

This was really cute! And funny! Good work. I especially liked Bonnie's line about "Now if you'll excuse me, I have to go back" etc.

Either continue this, or write a sequel...

PWEASE? (Insert PDP here...)

Never thought I'd see the day. Amazing.

Ron/Bon goodness. No possible way there is not a 2nd chap to this good fic. The way u bashed the Mankey/Monkey thing was very funny indeed. I look forward to your next KP fic. Peace and Good Night.

great one, i enjoyed it much.

YES! Bonnie finally admitted her true feelings for Ron, even thought it required the help of a truth ray. She may not have gotten the revenge she wanted but if she and Ron become boyfriend and girlfriend that would be the ultimate revenge. Nice one-shot. If you give any of my stories a read review and tell me what you think.

So I'm looking up in the sky, right? And I decide, eh, tonight's as good a night as ant for heaten devil-magic. So I arrange the scyring stones and slit the goat's neck, no big deal, andwhen the blood forms a perfect circle, I ask the Dark Lord GKLTHHUP "what kind of secret would Bonnie have pulled out of Kim?" And I am graced with the image of a mulatto cheerleader pointing just of screen and screaming "CHRONIC MASTURBATOR!"

Heed my Barren Master, S-Chrome.

Sweet! *g* I'll have to find a way to work the term "froob-hottie" into one of my stories. :D Remembering the truth ray episode and how Kim embarassed herself, I can easily believe that it would be humiliation nation for Bonnie to be hit by said ray. Works wonderfully as a one-shot!

Aw, you're just spoiling us, chromy.

Such delicious UST, revelations and uncomfortable moments are undoubtedly a fairly standard concept of most of your stories, but this one deserves its own recognition because of something I like to call the Fantasy Factor. The more unlikely it is, the more it should be written about, if only to satisfy the, well... it's mostly me, but I'm sure they're others who have the same opinion. Aren't there? Nah.

Haha! That was brilliant!

i like it.You probly could keep going with this.Maybe do a spin off of it.Later

*Why, oh, why couldn't Middleton High be one of those overcrowded high schools that let students out early at the cost of their education?*

Lol! Brooklyn Tech happenes to be one of those schools (40+ students!). I myself get out at 2:30. Not that I'm complaining or anything. Cause that would be stupid.

Anyway, nice story. keep it up!

Good story. I can't quite wrap my mind around Bonnie having a secret crush on Ron, though. In most of the fics I've read about Ron/Bon, that's how she does it. But I've always pictured Bon-Bon as the "take no prisoners" type. If she wanted Ron, she would make him the top of the food chain, no matter who objected. Other than that personal foible, I enjoyed it very much. The truth shall set you free? Maybe, but it's more likely to get you crucified.
Good work.

I don't buy the premise that Bonnie likes Ron (or Kim), even secretly. RonBon is just not plausible.

Still, this was very well-written, showing your usual penchant for snappy lines and spot-on timing. And how could I not laugh when I read the phrase "Froob-hottie?"