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| cherrysmex23 2006-11-25 ch 1, | abuseOh my gosh...when Asuma died...that was so sad. Asuma was awesome. This is really sad, but very well-written. |
| RedHeather 2006-10-30 ch 1, | abusewow..thats so sad and deep Good job! |
| Ceestar 2006-10-27 ch 1, | abuse*sniff* It's been an entire week and I keep hearing sensei ask me to stop shedding tears for him. That was really good, you captured Shikamaru-kun's character really well. I'm hoping to write a fic on how Team 10 copes in the aftermath of this tragedy, so please keep your eyes out for it. That was great, thank you for sharing it with us. Rest in Peace Sensei.. |
| Kimberly 2006-10-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseHello. I'm reviewing :) Umm...I don't watch Naruto so yeah, not really following here lol but as always, the writing overall is really good. You use hard words hahaha You'll probably be like o_O when you read this so yeah...I'll end it now. toodles~ |
| Artimes Athene 2006-10-24 ch 1, | abusegood story on a lighter note a antismoking story well keep up the great work |
| Mokusan 2006-10-23 ch 1, | abuseBrilliant. Simple, short, but brilliant. I love the emphasis on Shikamaru smoking. Wonderful. |
| Mini-Chobi 2006-10-23 ch 1, anon. | abuseI still don't get it. WHY THE ** DID ASUMA HAVE TO DIE! HE WAS AWESOME! TT3TT TT3TT TT3TT We honour you forever, Asuma-sama. |