Oh my gosh...when Asuma died...that was so sad.
Asuma was awesome.
This is really sad, but very well-written.

wow..thats so sad and deep Good job!

*sniff* It's been an entire week and I keep hearing sensei ask me to stop shedding tears for him.

That was really good, you captured Shikamaru-kun's character really well. I'm hoping to write a fic on how Team 10 copes in the aftermath of this tragedy, so please keep your eyes out for it.

That was great, thank you for sharing it with us. Rest in Peace Sensei..

Hello. I'm reviewing :)
Umm...I don't watch Naruto so yeah, not really following here lol but as always, the writing overall is really good.
You use hard words hahaha
You'll probably be like o_O when you read this so yeah...I'll end it now.
toodles~

good story on a lighter note a antismoking story well keep up the great work

Brilliant.

Simple, short, but brilliant. I love the emphasis on Shikamaru smoking.

Wonderful.

I still don't get it.

WHY THE ** DID ASUMA HAVE TO DIE! HE WAS AWESOME!

TT3TT TT3TT TT3TT

We honour you forever, Asuma-sama.