|Reviews for Dessert older|
| Pipra 1/16/13 . chapter 1
| ranneal 11/10/12 . chapter 1
Wow! Very cool and romantic idea here. All that I can say is 'if only' this could happen in the manga...where it seems that they barely know each other. She needs to do more than confess, which she has already done...she needs to kiss him just like you wrote about here:)
| SheWolf2468 10/26/12 . chapter 1
Awww how cute! Naruto x Hinata Forever!
| Guest 9/10/12 . chapter 1
*bangs head against the wall
That was smashing!
| Number1HinataFan 6/14/11 . chapter 1
I loved it! So cute! NaruHina 4EVA!
| sasuino4evr707 5/5/11 . chapter 1
supr cute but i was sorta confused bout their position Plus wat was everybody else doin? And also, naruto was a LITTLE out of character... but other then that IT WAS SOOOOOO OTALLY !
| vampiresoul1789 3/4/11 . chapter 1
could u make it longer please
otherwise,it was good :)
| hiNAru Aburame 3/1/11 . chapter 1
jeje, great. i love it!
| Towards the sun 11/16/10 . chapter 1
Very well done!
| Perpetual159 9/4/10 . chapter 1
Hehe! With such delectable lips as a treat, I don't blame poor Naruto-kun for having forgotten his dessert predicament.
Lovely one-shot! _ Those simple and innocent kissing scenes between this pairing always bring the fangirl out of me. XD
| DayDreaming0f y0u 12/27/09 . chapter 1
OMg! That made me breathless. Dang, that is exactly how dessert should be. Wow-oh-wow. That was, just, really. I can't explain it, but I loved it. Please keep writing.
| phooykazooi 12/5/09 . chapter 1
THAT WAS SO GREAT! I LOVE IT!
| XXsexy chickXX 8/18/09 . chapter 1
aww,that wuz cute! i wish sumthing like that accually happened in the show.i woulda been cute if naruto returned hinata's feelings
| kiuibi123 8/1/09 . chapter 1
| Oneiroi Epiales 6/17/09 . chapter 1
Aww this is just the most adorable thing I have ever read 3