You write Tifa well. Not too needy, not too strong, just right.

I have yet to come across other FF7 fics as enjoyable as yours. You are truly a remarkable writer. I hope you continue writing and sharing your stories.

I have a desperate weakness for people who want something and haven't gotten it. Especially if the reason is thickness on the other end (through no fault of his own) XDD. And ESPECIALLY if they are sweet, deserving people who are the unperfect foil to the perfect character on the other side of the highly controversial love triangle.

The only problem I have with this piece is that it's just a smidge too short. I have about five multichapters I really should get to updating, so naturally my muse is itching to get his hands on Yuffie's perspective for this oneshot. May I write a companion piece to this?

(Officially, I will get to it once I am done with everything else on my list, which will probably take a few weeks. But I'm probably going to use this as an excuse to put off my multichapters for at least a few days and write it first anyway. Aii, the lengths I go to for procrastination!)

Very cute =) It reminds me a lot of "Between Life and Love" - a much simpler, nicer version. I'm excited for the story on the "'for the love of all that’s holy, get a friggin’ clue, Cloud' Tifa". It'd be interesting to see how you'd write from a different perspective on her.

Overall, well done, as to be expected. You have a lovely style of writing. =)

Lovely fic - very gentle and touching. Emotions spot-on!

Nice oneshot! I love how cute and tentative they are. I also appreciate how you didn't get Aeris too involved...usually that's where ALL the insecurities lie. The 'helping' concept was a nice change. And the ending was adorable! Little things like holding hands are neglected too often. Good job!

Lovely writing. You got Tifa right, you got Cloud right and you got them right together. I love the way Tifa's memories kicked in at the end. it flowed beautifuly with the story and was very sweet and simple and incredibly effective. keep it up! I'll be looking forward to more of your work.

aw. wow. THAT WAS SO SWEET! and awesome at the same time...i am liking your writing...:D great one fic! CLOTI ROCKS!

this is very nice. I myself like tifa. can you recommend some good old cloti stuff?

gosh that was touching! i haven't grinned like an idiot while reading a fic for a long time.

you're right it really is cute to think that a strong woman such as Tifa would have those silly insecurities.