MAN! I wish you would write more of this! I keep checking back hoping to see a chapter three- your writing is amazing!

this is the best fanfic I've ever read!


...And I've read a LOT of fanfics, trust me.

You weren't kidding when you said your story had dark elements. The assassin's training is well done, though, and with none of the gratuitous elements that some fanfic authors bring in. Kudos to you for knowing when to be explicit and when to let our imagination fill in the gaps.

Can't wait to read more!

Oh. My. God. That's. All. I. Can. Say. It's. Just. That. Good.

I actually read it...Which is saying a lot. *laughs* Normally I'd be daunted by chapters that long, but not this one! It actually interested me, and even when nothing seemed to be happening, the words were fitted so seamlessly together; it was like looking at art in my mind's eye! Great work! :D This story truly deserves more reviews, not just on DA, but here as well...It's that good. ^_^ *tacks to Faves list*

This is really good! I never read about Tira and your story makes me want to read more! Please cont.

Mm, I LIKE this! :D I didn't read it verbatim, but dang, I don't care. IT'S SO DARNED GOOD! I love how you managed to portray their feelings and emotions and how you managed to work the details into the story without disrupting the flow... *chuckles* Stuff like that is hard to find. Yes, I definitely like this fic, so I'll see you next update! ^_^

A wonderful portrayal of the characters. Your use of vocabulary is spectacular and obviously better then mine. And though Tira isn't my favorite character, she's definitely interesting enough that it warrants this kind of story.

Excellent work. Keep it up!