One of my favourite pairings, and extremely well executed. I love it!

This was simply adorable. It was quick, cute and very light. I really enjoyed your style althought this story could have used more description but I suppose you may have written it kinda simply for a reason or maybe I'm just delusioned lol XD. I hope your write another Snake/Otacon. I'm such a sucker for that pairing. I loved it!

Oh thats So Cute!!

I absolutely LOVED it until the kiss. Of course, I would have known it was coming if I had seen the Romance rating, so I guess the only person to blame is me. Well written though!

I wonder if ketchup really works. Note to self check out ketchup and use as blood one day on april fools day! Right well good story check out mine called Reflections.

~Fluffer Nutter Need Fluffer Nutter~Vaporeon-Chan

I loved this! Having 'Snake and Otacon' in the summary of a 'fic is a great way to lure me into reading it. The idea itself is original, and while I agree that the characters for this fandom are difficult to write, I must say you've done an excellent job in deliberating their interactions here!

Nearing the end, I could see an opportunity for a kiss was in order, and thank goodness you concluded it on that note. :D Having Otacon say "That's such a cliche" was a nice touch.

Wonderful!

Lol, that was awesome. And I would seriously give my left nut (if I had one) to hear Snake say "pown" in conversation.

They're such a cute couple... Nice! Write moar!

Oh this is lovely xD Snake doing this makes so much sense, y'know? It's so true to his character XD Brilliant! It made me giggle and smile :D