this doesn't sound strained at all. it flows smoothly. very cute as well

Aww, sweet. I love it. These are the kind of Shweir fics I like - when they're married! And no, I didn't think it was strained - great job with it. ;D

Aww so sweet, I love stuff like this.

I like it because it is not mushy. my absolute favorite

I love stories with these two as a couple. I especailly lvoe this one. I like the P.O.V., the love, and the cleanliness.