It's not really fair to "punish" your readers in your writing because of some reviews, plus it deminishes your work as a whole if you do that. I mean part of me can understand that you want to stick it to them for their nagging, but your story is the one that truly suffers if you are purposely altering how the story wants to be written.

A not on the actual story. We are five chapters in, yet nothing has truly happened, nothing is concrete. There is no realy substance up to this point. You have built up some background but even that is not strong. I'm wondering if you are just opening up the story slowly or if there are just still so many holes in the story as a whole. Not trying to be mean, just trying to get you to evaluate what you have written. If this is just a back drop then it is alright, but I would encourage getting to the meat relatively soon. If this is the meat of the story, I was recommend going back re-reading and possibly re-writing to add more flavor and actual substance to the read. This skeleton of a story does have possibilities if it can be fleshed out.

The best of luck and all due respect,
Boe

omg i don't no what to do (mulan: what do you mean by that?) i mean i don't know if i should scram like a fangirl or go in to shcok (elizabeth: i go with the frist one becase then we wound't have to drag you off the floor) ... that so mean but i'll do that *scrams in joy* (everyone else: ow my ears) well i love this story and i can't wait for the next chap. and thhank you for not erasing this
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brittany b. pena

interesting... good story... I'm new with the whole Sasuke is the father and Naruto is the son kind of story but this is a great story so far! keep up the good work and update whenever you have time... take care...

this is a very good and sad story

its kinda weird tho how every story seems to be its own ministory x.x cept the first two i guess lol xD

Yeah, that would be annoying. People should let your story progress the way you want it to and enjoy the results. Seems to me that you're doing fine so far. besides, your story, your plot, things happen in it at your will. they just gotta suck it up and deal. Anyways, I enjoyed reading what's been posted so far and look forward to reading the next chapter. ^_^

Hm... I'm intrigued. Can't wait for more.

Oh my gosh! that was just to sad. I can't believe you were able to write a chapter like this so solemly(sp?). I just want to cry now because of this. But even though it was sad it was still pretty good. I also see that you were able to correct the Ino incident. Well please update soon. Oh and also I heard that someone in your family died. Is that true? You don't have to tell me if you don't want to but I hope it's not true. That would just be to sad. Well I hope you're all right.
Ja Ne

now theres a father-son relationship.
but great story!! ^^

Aw, so short! Wahaha. I got so excited to see that you updated though! I missed reading this story. Naruto is so cute. I wish he was my son...

is this real?! shit... I think I've going to cry when I'm finish with this...

Okay, that part slightly shook my interest..
but still, like how the story is going, or was. Who knew Sasuke was into children too? Heck, he's only interested TO Naruto.
Anyway the part about Neji liking...Sora...was a beautiful crack material! Even though this is an angst fic, i can't help but laugh at some parts.
So I guess Sasuke is going to actually make an appearance and Naruto is getting amnesia? Well, seems like it to me. Update soon please.

neji has a kid? where did that kid come from?

oh mention sasuke in the next chapter please...

Huh? Neji?! A kid? How old is Neji? Old enough to have a kid? Hmm, that's an interesting turn of events.

Haha, yes, SasuSaku is very evil.

Aw, thanks for the dedication! I feel loved. Hehe, and I do love this story! It's great.

I'm glad Naruto doesn't like 'too shy' attitudes, cause that means you won't pair him with Hinata(I HATE her, no offense though!)

wow, is it really based on a true story? I feel sorry for your friend, it is a really bad thing in reality life, but for an angst fic it's perfect.

since you said its a made up story why don't you put a little hardcore yaoi scene there with a wide awake naruto and the direct descriptions of how he feel (being touched by his father and not pretending to sleep) it will make the story more live you know, tell the feel/ right when it happens (now and there).

and it would be better if you also make it with another person POV like sasuke's or may be yours.and it would be more than better if you make it longer, no need to rush details somehow needed you know.

so far you're doing a good job, it really is a good fic, I want it more, well GAMBARI !

I lovesa it Joyce-su! It make-a me happy! ...But can we have some hardcore yaoi? Please? Sugar on top? ...Have sympathy for the deprived, poor, little, cripple!